A Restless Spirit Ascends
A inconsequential ending suspended in midairย
The soul is torn asunder not knowing what brought him to this precipiceย
Clouds building all around but he failed to see the signs of his wicked transgressionsย
Being a selfish bastard most of his life ,speaking in a condescending toneย
Living in a world of no consequences finally caught up to him with no remorse to spareย
Karma came looking to even the score as his restless spirit ascends to a unknown destinationย
Leaving behind a massive void the day of reckoning was here for him to enjoyย
Having no conscious or any care to the loved ones belowย
He slowly moves forward to accept a judgement for which fate has surely came to grab holdย
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Unbelievably powerful fantastically well-written work !
Thoroughly satisfying piece.
Take care my friend !
Hug. ย :)
Thanks Richard I always appreciate your comments, you are a very insightful man. The picture and my feelings took this write to another level ,take care rockย
Your writes seem to have more depth these days with you giving more of yourself through poetry.
Hug ! ย :)
Rock, Wow this poem was extraordinary!ย Just another one of your amazing poems from your heart!!!! You never cease to amazes me!!!!ย On a different note maybe that men needs a Root Canal!!!LOL LOLย take care from Loving Whatever Heart :) Dawn
Thanks loving heart, picking out a picture and writing not about me but how the image speaks to me .hope you had a great weekend, rock
Your Welcome !!!! Hope you also had a good weekend !!! ย loving Heart !! whatever.ย
Bradford this is an amazing write. you are very talented my friend!
Thanks Lisa the picture spoke to me and the words just flowed straight out. Glad you enjoyed. ย Hugs to you rockย
My Brother Poet Rock,
Yet, Karma took notice of the precious love in your heart for your son. ย So, it rescinds your judgement, as fate acknowledges that your soul is redeemable. ย For the love you have for your progeny can be used to engender your love for life. ย Sentence commuted. ย Free. Make Fate proud of you.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry