Poem -
A Siren's Song (Loop)
With sun-kissed lips from waters mist, a siren sings a song
song of love beyond the waves, of the salty crested shores
shores of shells from water swells, fallen from tousled hair
hair long with curls, her neck draped with pearls, she lures
lures you with her song, to mesmerize your eyes on moon's mirage
mirage on sea's horizon, the rising moonlight's glistening
glistening water where it meets the sky, then, splash--
splash, she dances along with her song, "Are you listening?"
A loop poems last word becomes the first word in the next sentence.
This rhyme scheme is ABCB.
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Comments
Enjoyed the music....all smiles
Thank you, Lorris, I appreciate you taking time to read and comment.
Happy you enjoyed:)
I also wrote a poem about Sirens, Kerry, and I believe it was just yesterday.
Mine is Petrarchan sonnet, however, not a loop.
This is very good, as all of your writing is.
Nicely penned,
Hugs!
~Dean ?‍♀️
Thank you so much, Dean, I greatly appreciate it.
I have to catch up on reading, I promise to get there. Hugs! xo
Wow KERRY!!..... this is BEAUTIFULLY executed!!...... perfect metering...... took me away into the place where the words themselves sing.... and the sirens whisper!!.....ALL STARS!!..... gorgeous write!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ??✴✴❤✴✴?
Awe... That is so sweet and kind of you, Tony, I'm thrilled you liked it.
I thank you so very much, I deeply appreciate your wonderful comments. Hugs! xo
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