Poem -
A Sweet Release
In your heavenly gladesย
I felt myself mingle with the sunlightย
That shone downย
to softly batheย
your verdant browย
How the air felt so invigorating against my skinย
I was akin with your charmsย
As we dwelled within each otherโs natural balmsย
Lingering between what had been
such a peaceful dawnย
To now mourn the sunย
But hail the moonย
Where dreams completeย
the meย
the youย
Through wishesย held highย
in the glistening droplets
of that gemstone skyย
And I...feel readyย
to let my soul driftย
To shift
To fly...ย
Whilst I permit my flesh to dieย
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superb write, excellent read
Yay thanks ever so much, always value your kind supportive words xย
Such a soulful write Gwen
'Through wishes held high
in the glistening droplets
of that gemstone sky'
these lines speak to me of an ache that never ever leaves, an utterly private agonising pain that can make life seem at times unbearable.
utterly beautiful โค
Thanks my friend, I always look forward to your insight on my work. You never fail to dig beautifully deep. I love that about you ๐ xx
Yee ha.ย
Yeah.ย
True spoken words, that linger. whilst I permit my flesh to die, mentality this is difficult for the soul to do, as grows fond of the wrapper it was born into.ย
Great poem about release, made me think of releasing a few lingering things of my own.ย
So thank you.ย
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Release, release my friend. And I hope you feel good for it ๐ Thank you for your wonderful wise words on this piece. Always such a pleasure to read you xย
Will do as the left unsaid can leave you feeling emotionally dead.
Thank you very much for the courage that you exude.ย
Yep .. quite beautiful & with a most unexpected ending .. although I can not explain why I found it so .. I shall have to pop back later, just to check and maybe satisfy my curiosity ................................ Nevertheless, Neville enjoyed 'A Sweet Release' ... Heck, maybe I should have guessed .. Doh x
p.s what I meant too say was that on my subsequent visit & further reflection, it hit me .. and not surprisingly, it ended perfectly x
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Aaah my friend. Many many thanks for stopping by a second time and for sharing with me your honest thoughts.ย
I was deeply thinking at the time, on how the physical body returns to the earth. I started writing about releasing the flesh to the earth and finding peace on leaving the body behind. So this is the moment where you feel your physical side connecting back to nature. Whilst your spirit lifts to the universe itself. Hope I make sense ๐ x
Perfect sense x
The physical world meets the spiritual world and of both outcomes good arises.
Beautiful, beautiful writing here on display Gwen and captivating to journey on your poetry plane.
Every poem you write has that essence of Gwen feel to it, I believe many on here would know it's one of yours, without your name attached.
For each is an original theme every time.
Thanks for sharing and especially the beautiful journey.
Shaun. x.
Elegantly spoken Gwen. You are such a talented poet~
This is awesome
Brilliant!
Thanks Tina :) so glad you liked it and found a favourite part to the piece too. Always a pleasure to find you stopped by xx
You're writing my thoughts ๐๐ป๐x
Always the best kind of compliments, thank you for checking out one of my poems today. Hope you enjoy cosmo xย
i find this one hard to turn away from, i keep going back over the lines again and again, beautiful, evocative, mysterious, it leaves me wanting more
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