Poem -
Premature
- In the primary sixth sense of a
- creature of darkness;
- a feminine birth is not
- given a warm welcome;
- always thought-about as
- undesirable; unwanted
- Well in advance;
- Hence aborted,
- Ahead of time;
- A butterfly is
- Burned on its
- Premature life
- alive and dead !
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BY
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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Totally agree with you on that one, great speech, i once protested against abortions, and won my arguments, much love to you and your admiration for human life xx
Dear Nardine Sanderson,
Thanks for your appreciation and love towards my poem.
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Sadly my body doesn't bare children easily, a struggle to keep all three pregnancy's to term, sadly loosing my last to the will of god, 6-8 weeks in.
Williamsji Maveli, completely agree with you. As a physician who is supposed to weigh the pros and cons of inducing abortions, I find it a practice difficult to accept. We are taught that the mother's health is of prime importance and jeopardising it by the continuation of pregnancy is not accepted. I object to abortions being used as a method of family planning. There are couples who are longing for children and have not been successful.
When I was an intern in the department of gynaecology and obstetrics, I requested the head of the department to give me permission to desist from performing abortions. I was fortunate that the lady understood my point of view, I did not perform a single abortion, but I had to observe the process, and it was heartbreaking.
Our Indian scenario being what it is, the birth of a female child is often not desirable. And quoting the law, pre-natal sex determination is banned here.
And now as a palliative care physician, I cannot say enough about life.
Beautiful lines: ...In the primary sixth sense of a creature of darkness;
Williams J Mavelli, I am absolutely shocked, stunned and outraged by your POST, this is not a poem of any kind. You surprise me Willy I thought you were a man of honourable intentions, yet you have used this site to voice your radical, hateful views. If this was a race hate comment or a anti gay comment, you would be brandished and sent to the proverbial gallows, I cannot believe if this has been seen by the 'powers that be' and that it has been allowed. WHO ARE YOU or WHO IS ANYONE to place judgement on every single woman who has ever faced such a terrible prospect. You make a sweeping statement that sounds like it is coming from an ignorant biggot. What a sad and bullying message this sends out, you have totally taken me aback, and I am deeply saddened by reading this. I APOLOGISE TO ANY WOMAN OR MAN THAT HAS HAD TO GO THROUGH THIS EXPERIENCE (THROUGH NO FAULT OF THEIR OWN) AND COME ON THIS SITE TO READ THIS CRAP! THIS IS NOT POETRY:(
Dear Rachel Gardiner,
This is a misunderstanding on my poem. I shall remove my SYNOPSIS. Read this as an opinion through verse only. Sorry if this has made any misinterpretations. Regret
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear Williams
I appreciate the fact that you have removed the SYNOPSIS, which was totally unnecessary to begin with. Everyone writes feelings, opinions, experiences, emotive stuff through poetry, that is what makes it so powerful at times, and so interesting to read. The SYNOPSIS was more than opinion and you should think carefully when putting such things out there. There are a lot of young women on this site who for all intense and purposes may have had to go through such an ordeal and posts like that could cause extreme emotional distress. Opinion should never verge on bullying. I am sure that wasn't your intention William and appreciate that it was a regret. Certainly no hard feelings, I just had to stand up for what I believe in and any other women who would have felt the same.
Dear Rachel,
Thanks for your positive thoughts and suggestions, I really appreciate that, No bad feelings from my part, instead, I appreciate your stand in this regard too.
Love, Regards
WILLIAMSJI
Very true words..I do agree with you Sir..!! Great work..!!
Regards
Surabhi