About This Author
I write down what’s inside
To capture what’s in my mind
The things I feel and see at that time
Like photographs, memories spring to mind as I re-read each line
I’m no different to you
Expect that I share what I have been through
I let you see the world through my eyes
I have no disguise
I want my message’s to be known
In hope that some of you won’t feel alone
We can become our own cure
When we believe were worth much more
I am very insecure
And worry is a flaw
Perfection isn’t here just a lady thinking clear
But to me life is pretty dear
So I’ll share my thoughts out loud
To hope that to a reader a message is found
I’d like to remind you of the strength you hold
In times that you have been bold
Or capture a quick memory from your past
That you will make last
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very nice poem x
thank you so much Susan
just wanting to get a little message out there as to why I do poetry and who I really am
Clo,Â
like water pouring from a pitcher to a glass you flow and wth ease you its delivered without the slightest of quiver in your tone of deliverance...I too just as (Sir) William am intrigued with the following lines...Judging from this poem insecurity has nothing on you and it you have mastered through this poem of power and self belief in yourself and in others, that should believe in themselves...Very inspirational and very secure to and within yourself...Â
Sincerely,
Jimmy
I’m no different to you,
Expect that I share what I have been through,
I let you see the world through my eyes.
I have no disguise,
I want my message’s to be known.
In hope that some of you won’t feel alone.
We can become our own cure,
When we believe were worth much more,
I am very insecure..............................................(On the contrary)
Wow Jimmy thank you so much for such a beautiful comment , just wanted people to know why I write as we dont often think to do this. . Thank you for showing me witch lines stuck out to you really means alot . Its grate to see what others connect with. Your definitely writw poem's have some what saved me , from reason in past I am quite insecure. But I'm growing the strength to believe in so much more poems are such beautiful ways to express yourself and let others see life through your eyes its lile art. You totally got myessage and so much more out of this poem thank you
You are quite welcome Clo,
This poem, just as the many others you have graced us with in the past, have a message for all to ingest and not only did you lay it on the line for yourself but for the many viewers that needed reassurance from your posted words as well.I am extremely sorry to hear of the rocky roads of the past but this road must i say, you, (through) your many well versed and well delivered poems, have constructed a road of flawless perfection and as you continue to travel, that which you have built and in the manner in which you have constructed it,each time you venture down this road for any rhyme or reason, your endeavors shall always be fruitful and from me to you, i hope they remain in that manner,(Fruitful and forever Prosperous).Â
Take Care and just as (Sir) William states, we are awaiting further verses from your pens of poetry.
Jim Arnold
P.S.
For (Sir) William, the best in the business, to pay his just dues, shows you are on top of your game, he is probably the only man i know, that will give you the truest of advice on poem do's and don't and does it with complete style and with the sheer purpose of advancement of the poem and the (poet,poetess) always kept in mind. I must recant that last statement,(Sayed) as well,assist (poets,poetess) in building a better profile for their poems and both gentlemen, delivers it with the utmost respect and care for the writer... Â
and thank you both William and Jimmy for your care time and advice, I will always keep in mind your kind words both of you. poetry is such a positive and beautiful way of connected or helping others. i'm so flattered with the words in witch you have both been so very kind to share with me. i'm honestly truly grateful and will forever treasure them thank you
love clo