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~ ~ Adrift ~ ~

~ ~ Adrift ~ ~

A mind adrift on the ocean wide,
changing direction like a rising tide.
Rocking to and fro with life’s events
these racing thoughts extremely intense.

When riding high atop a crest
all restlessness is put to rest-
then the bottom of a treacherous swell,
and the path ahead is hard to tell.

In rougher waters, droplets splatter
losing focus as all thoughts scatter.
From internal peace it’s a castaway,
just trying to keep the darkness at bay. 

Traveling along on an uncharted course
seeking solace from its own discourse.
The brain the motor, the body the vessel
with deceiving thoughts it continues to wrestle.

Weathering the waves, the lows and highs,
sometimes seeming it might capsize.
In need of an anchor to hold it steady,
for tranquil moments it’s desperately ready.

Still waters bring a sense of calm;
oars rest motionless in relaxed palms.
Then positive thoughts find solid shore...
a mind at peace to its very core.

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Leah Yodico

Hi Jacki,  we have to go through rough storms or dance in the rain## we will never know what's in store ahead 

Great write!  

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Jacki Goebel

Amen!  We take the sunny times much more when we have a little rain...  Blessings!*!*!

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Lorna

Hi Jacki, I love the turbulent ocean metaphor! Going through the rough, makes you appreciate the smooth much much more..Really enjoyed xxx

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks so much!  My next one is going to be more "sunny" I think... :)  Appreciate the feedback.  Blessings!*!*!

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Mizzy ......

Great analogies Jacki......Powerfully written....

Regards Mick.

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks, Mick, greatly appreciate the support!  I need to get out here long enough to read more of others' work including yours. :)  Blessings...

Jacki

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lodigiana

Lovely work Jacki!  life is a mixture of ups and downs, light and dark and turbulence and calm and I think we can all relate to  your words!

Lodigiana x

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