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Advice to the Good Son

Advice to the Good Son

Mother kissed me in the morning

then sent me off to war

She packed love and goodness in my head

sensing all I might endure

humility she also tried her best to instill

knowing how my pride and anger

is so raw and over powering

But she showed me the right ways

the proper roads to walk on

and how to be the cool head;

the pacifist; 'the stronger one'

taught me never to be an instigator

or lust after perdition

always be a peace maker

For there is always darkness on horizon

so take a step back,

look around

 use your common sense

and try to be the noble one

take the high road;

find a 'good'  cliche' 

to suit your mode

but somehow I knew

through wisdom or vision

that somewhere in the distance

despite all her good counselling

there would always be a need

to give out some old fashion 'ass whopping'

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Kimmy Alan

Reminiscent of a line from a poem, Maya Angelou once wrote.

"Here is my Christian lack, when I'm struck down, I strike back."

Good poetry point.

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Christopher Correia

lol, I like that line Kimmy, it has a certain irony to  it; since Christians are 'supposed' to be pacifists...makes me want to go read some Maya, cool man...thanks for that....cheers 

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sparrowsong

Hello Christopher...

Wise advice...

Thank You for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Tony Taylor

Hey Mamma Jamma!!..........I agree with Kimmy Alan..........."point well made brother!"...............been missin' you C!!..............later..............T xo

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Christopher Correia

Hey Sparrowsong, man my memory is bad, I forgot I just posted this, thanks for saying that.... I wrote it earlier this evening, after reading an old one I wrote....always a pleasure to post; when I have something to post, lol... sorry I haven't been commenting as much as I normally do, been crazy busy....hey thanks for encouragement to keep writing poetry, I mostly write prose, but poetry is such a challenge for me right now; I really want to get better at it....cheers

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Christopher Correia

Hey T, thanks bro. yeah I still like Cosmo, been super busy, but I did try this evening to write one, I try to post one every two week or so....yeah it is fun to not know where a write might take you, I don't write a lot of poetry; in relative terms, but I miss that part of it....cheers pal

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