Poem - 20 June 2018, 15:41

After the rain

I happen to notice the blades of grass
there where droplets
Of rain on each blade
It was so amazing
A tiny miracle
In itself and then I
Noticed my neighbors
Flowers how they have
Bloomed after the rain
Another sign of creation
and then I surmized
that God will show you
Nature at it's best
After the rain.

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Nigel Cresswell...20 June 2018, 16:30

Love this Angel but you sort of missed the best part; the smell of breathing wet grass just after the rain has stopped. Great write.
Nigel.

Angel20 June 2018, 16:59

Thanks Nigel angel good point
maybe I will include that.

S.zaynab.kamoonpury21 June 2018, 03:10

Yes God shows nature in all poses and like your beautiful sweet poem sings, after rain it is such a super show indeed. I like your superb freeverse here. Kudos.

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