Aint Over Till Its Over

i have so much fight in me, so much write left in me, so much to give, for as long as i live, so many words to express, in cosmofunnel i invest, so much unrest, ive got to get things of my chest
i write about anything i feel, most of all it's real, their is no words i steal, ears i need too appeal, get them hearing my message i spread, across this page before im dead, my words are as heavy as led, many tears i have shed, many wounds ive had have bled, right before your eyes, from sunrise till the stars are in the skies, i vent out before my physical form dies, an my spirit sets off and flies
im quick with the pens tip, it crosses the page so swift, old fashiond writing with a candle lit, candle wax melting straight from the wick, clever with words im far from thick
my life aint over till its over, i combat with words like a soldier, i can carry the world on my shoulder, thats one big boulder, ive got more luck than a four leaf clover.
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I'm not even going to attempt to help with this.
Don't worry, this will probably be the last poem I read of yours, James. I'll be bothering you no more.
No love lost there, right?
Suffice it to say I wish you all the bet in whatever it is you do in life.
Happy writing.
~Dean
Why whats the problem dean?
No problem.
Love how it rhyme's goes together well. Nice write dear friend, much love
Thank you kay appreciate your feedback girl ??
Spirited piece
Peace James
I sense your strength courage
Love of writing herein this
Poignant prose
All the best Jai:))
Thank you jai apprecitae your feedback my friend ?