Poem - 03 March 2018, 13:37

Alive

Part of the beauty of being alive
Is the will within us to survive
Be it one more hurdle in the race
Or the climb up the mighty rockface
The passion and strength, internal drive
Part of the beauty of being alive.

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The Soul

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Tony Taylor03 March 2018, 16:46

Amen To That!!.... powerfully succinct and most insightful........ well conceived and Beautifully delivered!!.......ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet sister!!..... Love & Rockets!!......T Xo ♥✳ ???

Shelley-anne St...11 March 2018, 13:04

Thank you!!

Dean Kuch11 March 2018, 14:53

I enjoyed the way you've book ended this with the repetitive verse, Shelley-anne St...
Good aabbcc rhyme scheme helps to keep the poem bouncing right along.
Kinda like life, when all is going well.
Nice writing!
~Dean Kuch