All Hope Is Gone
I can't take another minuteย
But this shit
Seems to be infinite
I'd pull out my hair ( if I had any )
Need a break from the insanity
Before I join the casualtiesย
Wish this carousel would stop
And let me the fuck off
I am nauseous and about to drop
How much am I expected to take
I'm not a steel plate
Pushed to the limits I will break
The enemy approaches from all sides
By boat is going to capsizeย
And I will be lost in the tide
Finding it hard to deal with it
Rapidly approaching my limit
This is so sadistic
I tried to push backย
I'm just one guy against an armies attack
And I think my castles been sacked
Night of the living deadย
But they don't moan they talk insteadย
This can't all just be in my head
Where's my will to carry on
I need an inspirational song
Because where I stand, all hope is gone
By LukeCoomer (c)
Like 3 Pin it 2
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
another awesome write, Luke one small typo. I think instead of tied you meant tide
Thank you Lisaย
that is absolutely true
Hi ย Luke Iย think many willย relate to your writeย
feelings of anxiety and all hope lost.
ย Your last lines
"Where's my will to carry on
I need an inspirational song
Because where I stand, all hope is gone"
Made me think of an inspirational song
Bridge over troubled Water by Simon ย And Garfunkle
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjNgn4r6SOA
Thanks for sharing thisย heartfelt writeย
best wishes Debsย
ย
Aww thanks Deb I will check it out
Brother LUKE!!..... you are droppin' records man.... these Are songs waiting to be recorded...... awesome delivery hopelessness in a VERY cool flow and formatting...... dude, you are so eminem! (smiles)..... Love your stuff my friend....... some killer phrases here!!.......ALL STARS.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.ย ?
Thanks tony
not sure how I feel about being compared to Eminem but I know your saying you like my rhymes so thank you