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ALL I EVER WANTED FOR YOU, WAS TO DANCE IN THE LIGHT

ALL I EVER WANTED FOR YOU, WAS TO DANCE IN THE LIGHT

All i ever wanted for you
was to dance in the light 
To err from the darkness
your life seeming, a forever night
 
I tried to save you,
but really you did nt want to be saved
I was suckered into your web of lies
twas that darkness. you craved

My belief in you was true
born out of love I defended your name 
I run myself ragged
only for you to bring me shame

I feel such a fool thinking you
would change,for your own good
I just wanted you to be respectable
and I believed you could 

Now i just cant help but feel used
and my heart is in pain
You know I tried we all did
but you hurt us,your family again

I will always have love for you
but for now I need distance to heal
I hope you realize some day
what you have done, and how we feel

All I ever wanted for you, was to dance in the light 
you choose to live in darkness,you choose the forever night 

 

 

 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Lorris Thank you for reading and commenting 
much appreciated 
Best wishes to you Debs 

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Rose Sho

I feel your pain in this Debs...Several times we choose what we think is the best for people we love but they make choices that end up affecting not only them negatively but a whole lot of people who care...You've tried your best...Let it be

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Sweet Rose  Thank you for your comments and support 
 I agree I have to let it be 
Lots of love Debs 
 

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Devon La Porte

Hello Debs, a very well said write which Im sure was hard to do.....sounds like someone battling addiction who is close to you, that is so tough because you want nothing in the world but to help them and ypu go anove and beyond with this notion that you can but the hard truth of it is, that you can't help someone who doesn't want to be helped they have to help themselves. Definitely a very tough situation, but I love the way you conveyed it.  Peace to you.

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Deborah Evans

Hi Devon Yes this was hard to write but since I have been 
writing here, I have written from experiences that happen in my life
it helps so much to write it out The story is a sad one, and I agree with your words
you can't help someone who doesn't want to be helped they have to help themselves.
Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments
Always a pleasure
Peace to you  and yours my friend

 

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Wolf Soul

Absolutely beautiful and so heartfelt.

I resonated with your word. Of times that have thankfully long past. You dance in the light. Allow your spirit to heal and take flight!

♡M

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Manon Lovely words 
Thank you for stopping by 
and commenting I appreciate 
Best Wishes to you Debs x
 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Greg Thank you for your kind words 
I  appreciate 
Best wishes to you Debs x

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Tony Taylor

Hey DEBS!!...... the pain involved in having to write this in the first place must have been extremely difficult........ so sorry my friend....... beautifully written......... there is much I could say here....... but I think this is not the forum....." All I ever wanted for you was to dance in the light..."...........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?✳✴☀

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Tony Yes this was hard to write but it did help to 
write it out You  and Cherie know the story behind it 
and i Thank you for your kind words and support dear friend 
Love n hugs Debs xo 
 

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Lorna

You can really feel the pain in this Debs, it's truly from the heart, Brilliant write!! Love and hugs

Lorna xx?

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Lorna This was a hard one to write but as I said to Tony 
it did help to write it out,
Thank you for your kind words always aprecciated 
Best wishes Debs xx

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Jai Masters

A poem of suffering for the suffering; 

left a tear; knowing the tragedy herein. 

We are your brothers and sisters and we 

understand as best we can this heart wrenching 

poem. Sending you pure thoughts & soul healing. 

Luv from Jai:) ?

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Deborah Evans

Awww Jai Thank you so 
much for your lovely words they touched my heart 
Luv debs :)

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Flower girl I am sorry you relate to this one 
Thanks so much for your kind words 
Love n hugs Debs xo

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Larry Ran

My Dear Debs,

The pain of finally realizing, after exhausting every avenue of help possible, that you must cut loose of a loved one, is excruciating.

But all of a sudden, you realize that your love is unreciprocated, and used only as a weapon against you.

I feel your pain and your sorrow.

But sometimes, "The Prince of Darkness", wins out.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry Thank you for your heartfelt comments 
on this one  it was painful to write 
Sometimes we have to realize enough is enough 
although I still feel love 
and want only the best for her 
Thank you again my friend 
Love n hugs Debs xox

 

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