Poem -
All well
Drank more bottles of vodka
Than a Peruvian would eat potatoes
In his life at time.
Surely you'd never steal my line?
I thought twice about how much
Of a nice guy I was.
Ended up thinking I'd re-decide.
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Comments
Made me smile...last 3 lines x
Now this is lovely 🌹 it's ok to be honest so what people drink alcohol look at the work of Bukowski he was always drunk until he wasn't, I see much more than words on a page I see the soul written inside it. It's ok to be yourself. X
I withheld this for long enough,
Because I value your input,
Or is it your praise?
I don't know you ever looked at my poem
Pretend soldiers?
Perhaps you have?
Shed some clarity on this for me, Shirley?
If you need clarity I am just a women who scribbles I don't think anyone is or should rely on my words on their poetry. However those I choose to give my time too and those who I look up to and respect as writers. I have just read your wonderful poem and I left my thoughts I give praise when it's due because it is free and I find myself to be a very polite person, input absolutely when one would asks I shall give my reviews happily, after all this is not a workshop and I know sometimes if I give input it could offend some, even though I hope it is to achieve an even better piece for the author. This is my hobby and I don't waste my time with those who I think won't appreciate it, I've had a traumatic month and I'm now on my holidays. If you ever need me just write and I'll find you. X