An illness for two!

This is the story of a very strong guy!
Who thinks he's superman, when he's high,
He's not high on life or a drug obsession,
He suffers from an illness, formerly known as manic depression,
He battles this demon day after day,
A God awful disease that won't go away,
It's mostly in winter when the craziness begins,
He gets totally out of control, and does silly things,
The high then withers, slowly but surely,
Yet he doesn't get better, he's still very poorly
I wish he would realise hes a very strong man,
And stop saying he can't, cos we all know he can,
After the mania, his mood drops very low!
Its up, then its down like a yoyo,
He spends day after day, lying in bed,
His mind digesting all the things he's done and said,
I'm here to help pick up the pieces he's on a crazy ride,
Ill Always be here to reasure him, standing by his side,
I'm affected by his mood swings, his high and low mood,
I put up with his nastiness, yet still cook his food,
I know he can't help it, he battles every day,
With support and medication, we can manage this, keep it at bay!
A brilliant mind, who can be funny sweet and kind,
A crazy cocky physco who I'd rather not know,
A man with no confidence, who has no will to want to keep on living,
A clever man, who is confident genuine and giving,
It's up then its down, there's a laugh, there's a frown,
Let's get you stable, I long to see your smile,
We both know pippi, it's been gone for a while,
Your mood will soon lift, and you will get back on form,
Then we can only try our best to keep you the norm,
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This is very informative but really sad...The rhyming is really nice....Well done
This is an EXCELLENT write TONI !!......taking on VERY powerful subject matter and doing it with creative style and an informative narrative interwoven ......dealing with extreme bi-polar issues is VERY difficult for the caregiver and the patient involved....... you've done a stellar job of conveying the intricacies, the high & lows, and the positivity required to handle it all.....I PINNED this for quality of writing..... lovely timing making it easy for the reader to use their mind's eye........ with stellar word choices driving the story line to a truly compelling read!!......ALL STARS!!...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!..... great write!!..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!!......T xo ?☀✴✳
Thank you tony! For your kind words! If we didn't encounter ups and downs we would never be inspired to write! And when I get feedback such as yours, it inspires me to write even more! I am new to this but I find it really helps me to cope! And unload my thoughts without saying how it is in too much detail! Xx
Thank you rose sho x
Toni, this is awesome to read, your courage patience and understanding makes me want to stand up and applaud, it is indeed a gift that this person has someone like you in his life, wishing you both well....the poem is outstanding, held my attention the whole way, cheers poet, great post
Thank you Christopher, im really glad ppl like it, I think art and poetry are personal, and we don't all like n appreciate the same, so it's good to hear that ppl like what iv done, as you never know how others will perceive things xx