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An Unmistakable She

An Unmistakable She

Hey, don’t you just love those
lateral flows
and of course, the seamless
flaws of hers
Each horizontal push and pull
Such a
splendid collection of pulses
and probes ..
Hey, don’t you just love the way
she holds her fork,
The unique way she sips her tea
indeed the way
She rolls her R’s for all the world
to hear, to feel
to write about and taste and see

 

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Gwendoline

Your ability to intimately observe a person is beautiful Neville. I also loved how this poem rolls off the tongue. A superb write my friend x

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Neville

Sounds good to me .. you really are way too kind though Gwen x

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RG

Beautiful poem highlighting small details to some but to someone in love those small details are little pieces of heaven . 

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Neville

You are a gentleman sir ... and I thank you most sincerely ... All Good Things, Neville 

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