Poem -
Hot and cold
Your voice is sweetÂ
but your words are sourÂ
your touch is softÂ
but your force is full of powerÂ
your eyes are brightÂ
but all you want to do is fightÂ
I've loved you for so longÂ
now if feels all wrongÂ
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This is an extremely cleverly structured poem; you build up a pleasing rhythm and rhyme scheme...only to bring it to a screeching halt with that last couplet;Â the poem itself mirroring the relationship it describes and your feelings towards it.
Excellent!
J ;)