and so the water flows

slow and ebbing
on it flow's
searching for a land to rest around
to watch it's droplet's grow
too much pain it bear's
soiled with waste and foul air
meandering around the wasteland's
seeking harmony and clean air
not much live's in it's water
not much survive's it's wrath
dirty grey and murky
it look's for another path
blue and clear
it found it's destiny
where love and care is found
resting around a peaceful land
that does idolize it's ground

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I think this is actually pretty good... I wouldnt chang or add anything.
thank you morris i seem to be in a funny mood today.too much heat here at the moment lol
very beautiful, stunning
I love it!
Interesting "A peaceful land that does idolize it's ground" unique and the way you describe it full of wrath
almost like the water in jealous on envious of the land or seeking revenge.
lovely poem x