Poem -
Anemone
Oβ tis bittersweet bane
Β Adour a hollow disdain
Adonis, I yearn thou grace
Come hither fond embrace
Pray-tell, what I ado
To earn abiding virtue
Sweet lips thou hoard
A hunt, thine sole reward
Grave tis a beastly pursuit
Tusks an envious brute
Ares debauchery afoot
Anemone conceptions root
Fairwinds a triste refrain
Torn from mortal plane
O' teardrops most profound
Posy melancholia resound
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Spectacularly Wrought, and I commend your use of complex rhyme. It's nice to see I'm not the only one who appreciates a good Ode.
thank you. I so appreciate you gracing my page to alight your lovely words of wisdom.
Hi Poetess,
I love the way Anemone's show their fractals. Lovely write Lisa
Nigel
Thank you kindly Nigel
Poetry at its finest.
Thank you so much, Gerard, your support means the world to me.Β
Beautifully elegant and in keeping with a high regard for complex rhyme!!.......ALL STARS!!.....ALWAYS a pleasure girlfriend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Thank you kindly TonyΒ
Lovely Lisa.....
Thank you kindly Lorris
Great write Lisa. Your use of word's and rhyming is truely professional. Your poem is also the title of one of my favourite Brian Jonestown Massacre tracks. Maybe you should check it out, it's very mellow.
- Syd xoΒ
Thank you kindly Syd I will have to check it out
it is rather a psychedelicΒ song kindΒ a reminds me of "a whiter shade of pale"
Psychedelic is very me. Thanks for checking it out. I'm familiar with the title Whiter Shade Of Pale but I'll have to check it out.
- SydΒ