Poem -
Angel
And as her wings now spread fiercely
like the magnificent curtains
on an ancient theatre stage
once again
I see her sparkling eyes
as if they were fifteen carat diamonds
her glow so warm
mesmerizing me
humbled by this
my untouchable miracle
as she gently whispers…
I am always with you
and just like that…
she was.
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Comments
Love the simile in your first verse. And I like the way you have set it out like each line is a stepping stone to the last one. It is very effective and, for this reader, very moving. "My untouchable miracle" is the perfect phrase for this poem. As are the last 2 lines.
My dear Bernie, your reviews always warm my heart and I love the idea of your title chosen from this work. You may also have it as a gift for a poem if you wish. Today it seems I have an angel in you sir. Thank you. I've got a few poems about this angel of mine, I hope you stay around to read them. 🌹
Thank you Shirley on more than one count. I eagerly await your poems to follow. I shall endeavour to do justice to your very kind gift. You honour me by referring to me as an angel. 🌹
Dear Bernie, I look forward to reading your work very much. 🌹
A very lovely write Shirley and I believe you are right...we all.have our angels, guides or deceased loved ones to comfort us...hugs x
Dear Marion I agree with your beautiful words, I certainly have mine and I believe we all do we just don't know it until we do. 🌹
Hello Shirley...
The ones on Earth have a way of making us believe stronger...
You're an Angel too...
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Thank you so much dear sparrowsong. Such a kind thing to say. 🌹
Hello Shirley
I think those angels guide us, and you capture this so well
Very much enjoyed
Lorna
Thank you so much dear Lorna, so very kind of you to come by and say. 🌹
the perfect read on this easter day.
love the dramatic opening, wings .... curtains on an ancient theatre stage
love the paining too! is that your creation as well?
Thank you so much dear Mark, I don't use my own art, I've never tried to paint angel wings although now you may have inspired me to do so, I love art and I find mine on the internet I always write my work first then find what goes well with my scribbles, I'm usually very lucky I find the most gorgeous art. Thank you Sir, happy Easter. 🌹
damm its really similar to this poem posted here mypoeticside.com/show-poem-168103 July 6th, 2023 by Teddy.15
And as her wings now spread fiercely
like the magnificent curtains
on an ancient theatre stage
once again
I see her sparkling eyes
as if they were fifteen carat diamonds
her glow so warm
mesmerizing me
humbled by this
my untouchable miracle
as she gently whispers…
I am always with you
and just like that…
she was.
Author: Teddy.15 ( Offline)
Published: July 6th, 2023 01:13
It Is in fact my poem, I am teddy.15 🌹 On this site I use my real name, not my pen name. Thank you for noticing lol I also play around with my work evolving it hopefully.
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