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Angel

Angel

And as her wings now spread fiercely
like the magnificent curtains
on an ancient theatre stage
 
once again

I see her sparkling eyes
as if they were fifteen carat diamonds
 
her glow so warm
mesmerizing me
 
humbled by this
 
my untouchable miracle
 
as she gently whispers…
 
I am always with you
 
and just like that…
 
she was.
 

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Marion

A very lovely write Shirley and I believe you are right...we all.have our angels, guides or deceased loved ones to comfort us...hugs x

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Shirley Harrison

Dear Marion I agree with your beautiful words, I certainly have mine and I believe we all do we just don't know it until we do. 🌹

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sparrowsong

Hello Shirley...

The ones on Earth have a way of making us believe stronger...

You're an Angel too...

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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Shirley Harrison

Thank you so much dear sparrowsong. Such a kind thing to say. 🌹

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Lorna

Hello Shirley 
I think those angels guide us, and you capture this so well
Very much enjoyed 
Lorna

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Shirley Harrison

Thank you so much dear Lorna, so very kind of you to come by and say. 🌹

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Mark Olcott

the perfect read on this easter day.

love the dramatic opening, wings ....  curtains on an ancient theatre stage

love the paining too! is that your creation as well?

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Shirley Harrison

Thank you so much dear Mark, I don't use my own art, I've never tried to paint angel wings although now you may have inspired me to do so, I love art and I find mine on the internet I always write my work first then find what goes well with my scribbles, I'm usually very lucky I find the most gorgeous art. Thank you Sir, happy Easter. 🌹

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thomas3535

damm its really similar to this poem posted here mypoeticside.com/show-poem-168103 July 6th, 2023 by Teddy.15 

And as her wings now spread fiercely
like the magnificent curtains
on an ancient theatre stage
once again
I see her sparkling eyes
as if they were fifteen carat diamonds
her glow so warm
mesmerizing me
 humbled by this
my untouchable miracle
as she gently whispers…
I am always with you
and just like that…
she was.
 Author: Teddy.15 ( Offline)
Published: July 6th, 2023 01:13

 

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Shirley Harrison

It Is in fact my poem, I am teddy.15  🌹 On this site I use my real name, not my pen name. Thank you for noticing lol  I also play around with my work evolving it hopefully. 

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