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Army Of Me

Army Of Me

Strength and courage in my stance
Constructed this wall with only my hands
Aside from divine will ,nothings getting through
Somewhere is a gullible girl who will believe you
Yes I'm aware ,I'm artic and harsh
Manproofing my heart , just playing it smart
Protecting my myself with this Army Of Me
Eliminating all possibility is my strategy
Saving myself from heartaches hastle
By protecting my heart ,guarding it like a castle
Such a nice guy , thank you for trying
Sell someone else , because I am not buying
Really it is such a shame
I haven't always been this way
Love is a game I'm no longer interested in
But also a game I hope everyone of you win

Written September 2013 -Jamie Neal
Painting -October 8 2015- Jamie neal

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jamie neal

Written three years ago after a break up and I of course was protecting myself like we all have. .I no longer need the wall but I still have always loved this one and I finally painted something I believe tells the story as wellof tthat time :)

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Richard Waters

Writing can be very cathartic at an emotional turning point ! This is a touching read at a time of change.

Good writing style with a clear perspective !

Thanks for sharing !  :)

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Tony Taylor

Hi Jamie!!..........your accompanying art is so cool..........what a great combo to have as an artist.........I enjoyed this write ......speaks to the "heart armor" we wear after having been walloped by the pain of a powerful relationship............but........I DO have a question..........what did you mean when you said ~ "Aside from magic, nothing's getting through.."?........I'm asking because I write a blog on Metaphysics and I used to work at a Magic Shop............so those kinds of references ALWAYS peek my curiosity..........anyway, sorry for rambling on like this!!..............keep 'em coming sweet poetess!.............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo

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jamie neal

That was written in 2013 .and meant to change that part to Divine will .and will do so now ;) So glad you pointed that out !

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