Good afternoon Tina and thank you so much for the great feedback , For such a short write , It actually took a while to write as I did want the maximum impact from the few words . Hoping you are keeping well and best wishes always Chris X
I really liked this line in particular. It has the reader consider who is the monster. The fire or the man himself causing it? A line that is fitting for both maybe? Sometimes our influences grow us into monsters. A really good writeĀ
Gwen :)
Good afternoon Gwen and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work , It did actually take a long time to write as I wanted so few words to be as powerful as I could make them . I loved your comment about 'man made monster' and want the reader to interpret as they wish . When I have a moment I will read some of your work and in the meantime , Will wish you a happy Wednesday and thank you again for your comment , Chris :)
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An uncomfortable read ...but then it is supposed to be. Few words for maximum effect done extremely well. Superb ššš x
Good afternoon Tina and thank you so much for the great feedback , For such a short write , It actually took a while to write as I did want the maximum impact from the few words . Hoping you are keeping well and best wishes always Chris X
This is a fab mini write
I really liked this line in particular. It has the reader consider who is the monster. The fire or the man himself causing it? A line that is fitting for both maybe? Sometimes our influences grow us into monsters. A really good writeĀ
Gwen :)
Good afternoon Gwen and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work , It did actually take a long time to write as I wanted so few words to be as powerful as I could make them . I loved your comment about 'man made monster' and want the reader to interpret as they wish . When I have a moment I will read some of your work and in the meantime , Will wish you a happy Wednesday and thank you again for your comment , Chris :)
You are so welcome, and many thanks in advance. I will definitely take a poke at more of your poems. I hope your day has gone wellĀ
Gwen :)