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As His Guitar Gently Weeps

With Jack Tomlinson

As His Guitar Gently Weeps

He sits in silence, 
And plucks the strings,
Waits patiently for it to begin,
He gets lost in moment,
His dreams run away with him,

But if you were to see him,
Perhaps you’d see a college student, 
Buried in debt,
But what you don’t see,
Is in the clay of stardom, 
Are where his dreams are set. 

Perhaps you’d see is a musician?
A rogue with a whisky stained teeth,
Who dabbles with drugs, 
In his dorm beneath,
The tower block, 
That touches the sky,
As he drifts away in 
This illegal high, 

But for now,
He plays the guitar every night in bed,
Plays the music,
Bleeds out the lyrics from his head,

Blocks out the trauma,
Blocks out the pain,
From those that judged him,
Caused him pain,

One day he’ll be released from this cage,
He’d do absolutely anything,
To be like his heroes, oasis, 
To be on the stage,
To perform with such beauty,
With such rage,

With all his strength he’ll take revenge,
On all those that that did him wrong,
As his guitar gently weeps,
He’ll sing his song,

But for now sits on his bed,
Plays his sad guitar,
Looks of the window,
Looks out at the stars.

Jack Tomlinson and Sarfraz Ahmed
© 2021

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Sarf!! Brill collaboration! I love it! Px đź’śđź’śđź’ś

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Wowww an excellent awesome poem collab,  its written so creatively on a guy with high hopes yet facing dejection in the moment. Kudos for this great wonderful write on him.!!!

Plz do check out my newest too and plz do leave your thoughts comments

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Sarfraz Ahmed

Bless you, this was a collaborative piece with my friend Jack a very talented poet. We both have similar styles. Check out our poetry on Amazon. 

Your words are well received xxx

Many Thanks 

Sarfraz Ahmed xxxx

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Gwendoline

Wonderful piece, the guitar can feel so cathartic. I felt that in this read, really lovely and a collaboration too. You gel well 
Gwen :)

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