As I Lay

Cheers, Pseudonymous;
-I found it very interesting and quite ingeniously creative to break up the free verse structure in such a the way you have, as to increase the readers expectations and anxiety, in such a way, to increase and enhance the entertainment experience.
-Each rhyming word was contingent and supportive to the meaning and concept of each line therefore making the rhythm of the enjambment to flow smoothly. The enjambment is actually the vehicle in which the topic is propelled.
-Good demonstratively descriptive imagery with definitive expressiveness that created a uniform emotion.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex