As I Sleep
Eighty-Four Pins is my first collection of Poetry available now! Order on www.amazon.co.uk

Written as part of the deep thoughts poetry challenge...
Thoughts so deep,
Stir in my mind,
Memories of all that I’d left behind,
Still linger and fall,
In amongst the shadows,
In amongst it all,
Now and then I begin to recall,
All that I’d tried to piece together,
All that I’d try to escape for so long,
In amongst the beauty that shone,
That look that you gave me,
That kept me going on and on,
When all that I once loved,
Had gone,
With every heartbeat,
I fell deeper and deeper,
Until all I could see was you,
There was nothing else,
That moved my world,
Turned it upside down,
And broke it apart,
For in your hand you held my heart,
You filled it with such positive vibes,
Kept me alive,
You cradled me in your arms,
You gave me something,
That stirred deep inside of me,
That transformed into memories,
That I hold so dear,
That when I close my eyes,
You are so near,
Always in my thoughts so deep,
In dreams that stir in my mind as I sleep.
Sarfraz Ahmed Copyright 2020 ©
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Comments
Wow, Sarfraz, this is amazing! The loss after such a love is unbearable and you so very eloquently showed this in your beautiful words x
Tina?,
Thanks so much. I don't get time to enough to share my work, since the book came out. I loved writing this poem. The words are sentimental and reminiscent of loves lost and memories that linger...thanks my poet sister xxxxx
Erm....sorry to disappoint but t'was only me...a mere mortal ???
Tina,
Sorry about the confusion. Your comments are amazing. Thanks Sarfraz
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Hey sarf this is so beautifully written!! Portrayed a love lost so eloquently. Brilliant. Enjoyed reading it. And you are so good at writing romance! You can Cherie I love it. Ssooo pinned!! Px?
Pratibha love your support. A love the sentimental side to the poem.Thanks Poetess Pratibha xxxx
I loved and pinned your ‘As I sleep’ ever so good ❤️?❤️
Jill,
OMG! Thanks so much! You know I am your biggest fan. It is an honour!
Glad you like it...
Loved writing about my deepest thoughts. A poem that brings out my sentimental side. Take care Sarfraz x
Aww Thanks luv that means so much to me ❤️?❤️
Sazzafraz!
That was fantastic!! Wow. Gorgeously penned. I'm so impressed with your writing.
And thank you for entering the challenge! It was a lot of fun, and we have some great fake prizes when I judge it, like sqwackle, and a new yak.
(Note: you may be a winner already, but of course, I told everyone that because everyone's were great!).
Awesome job, Sazz!!
Matthew.
AND you got 5 likes and 5 pins! 100% ratio! I always wanted to get that, but have failed miserably. Although, once I got 6 likes and 5 pins(which I think is about 83%), so I was happy...but sad. lol.
Awesome!
M.
Matt, oh wow! 5 stars! Yippee! Cosmo is so unpredictable isn't it? Loved writing this poem. Flowed so naturally. I am currently being influenced by a group of poets in NYC. I think they are influencing me positively. I will penn so more for you. Thanks Matt my poet brother!
Matt,
Defo will enter some more poetry challenges in the future. Please let me know. Thanks for your kind words. I write from the heart. Always. More to come! Sazz!