Asthma Attack
Like a snake, you strike without warning
Vice grips tightening, constriction lurking
Body pulsating, Lungs weeping
Synchronicity like base beating
Loss of control, You have the power
To your command I will cower
Body weak, Breasts heavy, Lungs screaming
All I am every breath pleading
Paralyzed by panic and fear, Chest is tight
Give me strength, Ease my fight
Breath come back to me
I am powerless, You run the show
Making me feel every massive blow
Manipulate my temple, overpower my mind
Precious, Beautiful, This breath of mine
Without you I am nothing
Still, Gone, Rotting
Stop my heart, Bleed me out
Snap my neck, Torture me with doubt
But please Don't take my breath away
I see you, I hear you, I feel you, I need you
Not an addiction or a lover
Not a thrill or a delicious supper
You are my breath more powerful than all
Put me up against a wall or make me fall
But please don't leave me, That would be the worst fate of all
Like 1 Pin it 0
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
Wow Lori 76!!!.....I have had Asthma since I was a little boy.........and I can say without hesitation.......you have just painted something that can be easily to by ANY asthma sufferer........it's only been in the last ten years that I haven't had to walk around with my inhaler in my pocket!!........this is truly amazing imagery and even more powerful word choices running throughout!!..........."Body pulsating, lungs weeping..".....wow!.......stellar write my friend!!...........ALL STARS............T xoxo
Thank you! I still carry my rescue inhaler with me. Just incase because not being able to breath is terrifying. i use it very seldom though. I am glad you asthma has improved. Not fun at all.
Hi Lori, great write, well written, you made me experience the feel in these lines.
"To your command I will cower
Body weak, Breasts heavy, Lungs screaming"
Great job, Warm Regards. Cheers.