Lie, Sin, Wrong, Shame, Oh I Mean Sexuality
Our sexuality is the biggest lie we tell our partners and ourselves. Our sexuality is what we won’t admit to ourselves that turns us on. Sexualality is the bad that makes you feel so good, the sin you go to confession to confess, the lie we cover up our entire lives. Society has molded our sexuality into a boring life leading to impotence. What should turn us on and what actually turns us on will never meet if we follow any societal relationship rules. Most people hide their sexuality and are ashamed of what it truly is therefore burying our sexuality. Sex is the greatest natural high and society has shredded it into a dirty sin that we hide from everyone especially in committed healthy relationships. We are all ashamed of our sexuality no matter how open we think we may be. I say ask your computer. I’m sure it knows more about your sexuality than you or any sexual partner you have been with.
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Stiletto 76
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A bold write, though this is not in a form of poetry, the theme is excellent, very open, I agree with your views in this regard, my applause, delighted to give your write five stars
Love & regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you for the welcome and your comments. I truly appreciate any criticism. I published on my iPhone under poems by accident and I do not see a way to change that or to delete a publishing either. Thanks so much. Love and regards reciprocated !
I enjoyed your write Stiletto!!...........because it was engaging........and well written........but.....I completely disagree with the last 4 lines.........I think beauty or attractiveness is an individual choice.........and some peoples standards are completely different from others ideas on what beauty is.........so in my humble opinion......I beg to differ..........love and rockets!!..........TÂ xx
I agree T.... I am only referring to our sexuality or (what gets us off) if you will, not who we are attracted to or what we think s beautiful. Purely sexual stimulation. xoxo
I think people can just read other people like a book these days, alot of people are closed minded when it comes to SEX~ being so judgemental, takes alot of maturity to share sexual desires fully with another person, we live in a childish world, i dis like pornographic entertainment, its cheap as hell, but each to their own i guess, i once had a threesome with two guys i dated just for kick's, i have a collection of toys for those cosy nights in with a desired partner, I'm not ashamed of telling you this, nor anyone for that matter, it's each to their own agenda, & while I'm here, i can guarantee myself an organism faster than any man yet has given me,
is that the type of comment you were after with this piece of judgmental writing?
Judgmental it is not ! An opinion is all! I like to make my reader think as well as keep their attention. I was not looking for anything. I appreciate your honesty and willingness to share. I admire you ! From what I have gathered thus far, you are bold,brave, independent, beautiful and raw. I have met few like you.
You know what sweetheart, honestly doesn't come without bravery, sometimes i think they belong together ~ like a yin and yang, weaknesses only fuel lies, while in time moulded together make one big one( eventually people wake up to realize they lived a lie their entire life because of being to gutless to live inside the truth of reality.
thank you for your honest comments back, much appreciated
half of the poetry here is fantasy coated with partial reality ~ like reading someone's deepest desires they don't have the guts to fulfill, emotions and desires running through ink upon a page doesn't mean it is just words either some are the truth, masked by fantasy, i guess that is what makes the world so interesting ~ definitely mixed composition. Maybe next time ask your readers why they hide behind emotional masks when all are beautiful people ~ with their own rightful desires to fulfill regardless of opinion haha, anyway i think I've put myself out there in honour of personal pronouns
we need to be careful when writing to not aim at our readers, but invite them into the subject ~ with a certain care and manner, instead of directly placing them into a category without the slightly egotistical tendency. Nice to meet you too, miss independent xoxo
Wow Stiletto, engaging write, and did you ever surprise me with the last line; your computer? Really? You mean figuratively or literally? It's an interesting philosophy; my PC knows more about my sexuality than I do....that I will def. give lots of thought to...your writes are never boring, Stiletto and that's an obvious understatement....cheersÂ