Poem -
AVE MARIA
Ave Mariaย i sit in churchย
With the moon shining in
and hope he comes soon
Ave Maria i prayer to him
and hope he see the tears
in the worlds eyesย
Ave Maria the childrenย
sing for him and the bells
ring in churchย
Ave Maria i close my eye
and feel his hand on myย
head and i feel blessed
Ave Marie the world loves
you now. Ave Maria
ย
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Yeah, I have heard Mario Lanza sing Ave!!...and I agree with you he does it beautifully!!โฆ...Another lovely write my friend!!โฆ..Proud of you G!!โฆ..you just keep getting better and better!!โฆ...ALL STARS!!โฆ...LOVE & ROCKETS!!โฆ...T xoย : )
Thank you Tony Some days I can do it some days I just think itโs too much pressure with others doing their challenges but if I just relax and be myself I can do it
Awww I adore Ave Maria my poetic friend โค๏ธ?โค๏ธ
Thank you Jill I love Ave Maria I can listen all day and find many people sing it
Yes me too so beautiful in many different voices and styles โค๏ธ?โค๏ธ
Hauntingly beautiful greg
Thank you Simon I hope you enjoyed the video she has a marvelous ways and this ย poem Is my version of Ave Maria for years
I wanted to Write ย it but every time and I would hear it in my mind it was ย in English and then it would end up in a foreign language so I couldnโt write it today I did not hear the foreign language so here it is
Excellent poem, Greg x
Thank you being me this version I wrote for a long time I wanted to write it that every time that it would be in my mind it would start out in English I didnโt go to a foreign language so I didnโt couldnโt write it but yesterday that didnโt happen
There are some poems that just "need" to come out ?. Well done x
A truly beautiful write Greg, I love Ava Maria also...pinned my friend ?
Thank you Marion
Superb write Greg, such beautiful words to go with the musical backdrop.
Thank you Lisa this is my version of Ave Maria for a long time I wanted to write and I could hear it in my mind starting out and then it went from English to some foreign language and I couldnโt write it so the day I wrote this it came to me in English so I thought Iโd take a chance And came out the way I wanted it so please that it came out so itโs all good you have a wonderful day Peace and love to you and hugs
Our Dear Friend Greg,
You have glorified with your lovely poem, one of the most beautiful songs ever created, "Ave Maria".ย Well done!
All our love,
Linda and Larry xxx
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thank you Linda larry xxoo