Poem -
Awaiting king
I am not moved when songbirds sing
I do not weep when church bells ring
My heart cries out for just one thing
This is my yearning to be king
I feel no pain when mad bees sting
I do not flinch when rose thorns cling
My soul and mind know just one thing
My destiny is to be king.
Comments
Hello Your Majesty...
Welcome to Cosmo!
Quite ambitious indeed!
Anything is possible...
Believe it and you can be it...
If you're not a good king you won't keep your throne...
The Queen will knock you out and lock you away in a chamber...
:)
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you for the nice comment
Appreciate it
nice rhythm to this giving it a nice good feel :-) you rhyme is very well. enjoyed
Thank you I appreciate that
clever poem, Thomas Hatchet, cool confidence on display, well constructed and oozes creativity, I like its simplicity, and it certainly bends toward affirming the veracity of your ambition, love the tone, this is a very good poem, enjoyed... cheers poet
Thank you Christopher, comments like this are the reason I write.
to encapsulate an array of thoughts that aspire , such inspiring words, requires a humble soul with a brilliant mind,,,
Bravo!
Your word inspire more than you could know.
thank you