Awakening
The candlelight  flame casts strange shapes on the wall.
The cracks in the blinds let in light.
A Â gold harvest moon floods the room with its thrall.
The dawn creeps so close, soon will banish the night.
I pull up the covers, to hide out my fear,
my pillow, like stone âneath my head.
I know that when daybreakâs about to appear
Iâll face what your actions have said.
The wind rushing through the trees, loosen their leaves
as I lay in my bed oh so cold.
The blustering breeze, shaking all of the eaves.
my heart beats but  canât be controlled.
The love that I feel for you eats at my soulâŚ
So deep that it makes my world sing.
Without you Iâm nothing, not half and not whole,
but I know what tomorrow will bring.
I live for the night and pray morning wont break
and I donât have to see you disguise..
What I know will be there when  I see you  awakeâŚ.
Your loveâs died and itâs there in your eyesâŚ..
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Hi Cherie, I love your comments and as always appreciate your insight and understanding-Â
Thank you xxx
Wow!! LODIGIANA!!.....this almost made me cry....... it's beautifully sad...... to know that it will be there in his eyes...... the next day...... would make any loving soul pray that morning did not come........ you've created some gorgeous phrasing here....... making up a truly compelling piece of poetic prose........ you have a gift with words..... perhaps they will be your salvation some day........ for now....... keep writing......... with a heart like yours....... the possibilities are endless........ALL STARS!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?âłâ´â
oh my dear friend your words really do hearten me! ......I am so grateful  people take the time to read what I have written and I hope that they find pleasure in the pieces. We all need salvation Tony and I can think of no better way to try getting there than through words....your comments  always encourage me to continue and, I hope,  to produce more pieces to share with this wonderful community of wordsmiths! Thank you so very much Tony .........
Lodigiana xx
this is really good, Lodigiana, the setting is crisp, captivating and nicely framed, I really admire your prose here, and the implications you present capture the imagination, this is a memorable piece, so well thought out, I enjoyed greatly, cheers poetÂ
How kind of you to comment  so positively Christopher!when not writing poetry I am a person of few words and get tongue tied talking to 'real' people so am always humbled by any praise. More than this though it makes me so happy if anything I have written has been enjoyed... so thank you dear fellow Poet!
Lodigiana x
Hi, L.
Your poem is very heartfelt and your words feel so genuine! (not easy to do with rhyming poems) Vivid imagery and raw, and deep sentiments........
Hi Linda, thank you so much for your comments - always appreciate anyone who takes the time to read the writes!Â
Lodigiana x