Poem -
bad mouthing
you took my heart - ripped it in two
shared it with your friend's
drove me round the bend
hurtful word's - I didn't love back
you twisted mine - said" you" gave me the sack
but i don't care - love was not there
showed you the door - you came back for more
friend's don't believe - they saw the sign's
I was your want - you were not mine
a mouth like garbage - run me down
now I am throwing you out of town
treat me like a dog - well this one bit back though
glad I packed you up - told you to go!
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Very nice poem Tina, are you writing books ?
too right Tina good write cheers x
thanx susan tina x
aww thanx art4life215 im not writing books would love to sometime though tina x
Nice! For sure,this is a universal experience for most gals! x
Good write
ha ha! your right there vianca thanx tina x
Loved It.. :)
John
john thank you tina x
Now again this is what I love to read.. Great work on this piece, good shit :)
morris thank you well appreciated from you i try lol tina x
Good chocolate??? What's up with that lol I didn't type that.
LOL council chambers morris i think seriously did you not write that lol i thought you went soft there i was shocked lol
tina x
Lmbo I def didn't write good chocolate lol not my style.. This kinda changes my post input because when I write not always will it "G" rated.. And I can't have my work changed, especially if the world can read it
Is me typing "good sh$t" not allowed or something
is that a dollar sign?
Yea had to take the "I" out and put the dollar sign so I can say me famous saying :(
well it works still ! god that was funny aye it looks just as good with dollar sign