Poem -
Battle of the Sexes !
Mankind in second place, as they beguile,
Nice manners always shown , when e'er he greets,
Just treat her right, bestow fine lavish style,
In love, to fan her flames 'neath sizzling sheets.
All men are weak, 'tis women make them strong,
Her curves, her eyes, our smitten heart she steals,
To notice mini skirts, for men not wrong,
Or sexy clicks of tall stiletto heels.
It's female minds that cause us males most grief,
As kitten turns to lioness with claws,
To hear her purr again, oh! such relief,
Smart men to bite their lip, not pry the cause.
"The Greater Of Two Sexes".. Womanhood !
Fine creatures to be Loved, not understood .
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Comments
Bravo, my friend!
Wonderful form, is it not?! And writing in iambic pentameter always makes you feel like a real poet...well, it does for me anyway!
Beautiful sonnet. And so distressingly true.
J ;)
Many thanks Jason.....
I agree with you....The Sonnet is my favourite form and to conform to the rules is a test for any poet.
Mick.
Hi Β Mizzy Β A Lovely piece.Β IΒ Smile at theΒ
respect you show women here you are a gentleman ( smiles)
I enjoyed this lotsΒ
Great writeΒ
Best wishes DebsΒ
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Appreciated Deborah......
Cheers ! .....Mick.
Wonderful verse Mick.
Lisa
Cheers Lisa......
Regards Mick.
Excellent Sonnet MICK!!...... Love the controversial subject matter here!!...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!....some stunning phrasing within ~ " Smart men to bite their lip, not pry the cause"......LOVE it brother poet!!.......ALL STARS!!..... well done!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.Β ?
Many thanks for your kind review Tony......
Regards Mick.
Hi Mick,
Yes, if a man seeks a happy heart, his path is through his woman. Β For if hers is smiling, than he knows he has brought happiness to her soul. Β He knows that this battle's success will always rotate around the passion she bestows upon him. Β Be smart, oh ye males, envelope thy ladies and let them know they are unique.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Much appreciated Larry.....
Regards.....Mick.