Poem -
Beat me up, my love
Take it out on me
I can handle a lot
You would be surprised
Physically
Emotionally
Mentally
Tell me your troubles
With words that cut and sting my heart
Pierce my soul with eyes that burn
Show me all you got, empty it out
All your anger and all your hate
Pour into me
Like poison in a glass
For me to take to quench my thirst
Let go of the pain you have and bring it to
Me
I can take it
Beat me up my love
So you wont have that pain
Anymore
Beat me up my love
Beat me up.
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Comments
Hello DEREK!!….I REALLY like the different point of view that you've taken in this VERY clever piece of poetic prose!!…...the idea of allowing one's significant other to empty themselves of all of their hurt, animosity, pain, and loneliness into their mate, willingly, is such an act of kindness and empathy that it shines like few people are ever able to accomplish......the foundation of this piece is truly brilliant!!…..ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!...well done dear poet brother.....and...….WELCOME to COSMO!!…….LOVE & ROCKETS!!…...T xo : )