Poem -
Before
I raced between the bright stars
i knew not their name
I had no reason to fear
I was unknown
unseen by the great eye
I was free of destiny
Far from the harness of life
I did not seek this
I ran from it
Knowing it was pain and shadow
Knowing the rears I would cry
I felt it in the ether
The songs of the stars called me
Their love was real
My fate was lost in Oblivion
Yet my sacrifice was counted
Towards a debt that was not mine
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Comments
Most certainly an epic tale Violet, beautifully presented.
Thanks for sharing.
This is stunning Violet...I especially like the last lines
"Yet my sacrifice was counted
Towards a debt that wasn't mine"...there are so many bad things that humans do...most of us are horrified but ultimately we will all pay the price...great write ?
Wow! This is beautiful writing!
"I raced between the bright stars
I knew not their name" ...
these lines pulled me hungrily in.
And then the last glorious lines...
"My fate was lost in oblivion
Yet my sacrifice was counted
Towards a debt that was not mine."
??? l love this poem. Pinned! x
Thank you so much for your comment it means the world to me have another enjoy it
violet