Poem -

Begin Again, Never Over

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All the taken minds. Are those we left behind. No more chasing lies. Or enslaved it is we die.

Marching on one by one. Raining ashes we drown. Don’t know where we are. Holding each breath as we march.

Darkness creeps ever so slow. Can’t see how fast that it grows. Lurking in every footstep. The further we go, close it gets. 

Hunted by death in the night. Soul stealing unfortunate lives. Evading the Grim and his blade. It is only I who remains.

Uncertain of what is to come. I venture into the beyond. Infinity of the night. Forces me to seek the light.

The abyss of the end seeks me. To taint the last chance of beginnings. I won’t give up my breath. As long as I swim from the depths.

And even the current so strong. Can’t pull me where I don’t belong. Though water may fill my lungs. I swallow my pride to go on. 

For all the taken souls. Give me the strength in my bones. I will avenge your ends. Replenish this void and kill death.

I am the only one. Who can undo what’s been done. Begin again, never over. Until death do I part we recover.

Darkness is all that’s in sight. When I put out deaths lights. Letting go my last breath. Rebirths lost life to begin.

Marching on one by one. A lone soldier that I was. Swimming through ashes of souls. Drowning to breath on for all.

All the taken minds. Are those I left behind. No more chasing lies. Or enslaved it is I die.

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Katina Woodruff...

OUT STANDING 
BRAVO!
AMAZING IMAGES

Did I mention how much I enjoyed reading this poem? The format you used was unique and steady throughout the poem. I liked the short sentences that fit evenly within the next stanzas. You have an incredible lyrical & narrative story telling voice. I really cannot wait to read the next poem you have pined. 

Favorite Lines: 

Darkness creeps ever so slow. Can’t see how fast that it grows. Lurking in every footstep. The further we go, close it gets. 

I almost forgot to mention, there is one area that you may consider revising.

In the last line above

..The further we go, close it gets.

It may read better as:

...The further we go, the closer it gets. 

Food for thought. 

Thank you for sharing your poem. 

I'm so thrilled!!! 

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Tiana Devlin-Sailor

Thankyou so much for your feedback.!! I’m happy to know you enjoyed this. The words literally just pour out from me and form these unique pieces. 

Although I haven’t been writing much lately, please stay tuned for the next to come.

 Not even I know what my words will form next and that’s the best part. ? Looking forward to more feedback. Much appreciated.

Thankyou again.

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