Poem -
Belief
In every interest,
In every aspect,
In every way,
It`s all a distraction.
There is a reason,
Behind the string of meaning.
The why of the whys,
Six sense of âbelievingâ.
We can all feel it,
Buried in our minds.
We call it the soul,
Cause it`s hard to describe.
This inkling sensation,
That we were placed not born.
On a spherical chessboard,
Billions of pieces or more.
So no matter who`s right,
Does it really matter?
I for the creator`s intentions,
Are for purposes we can only imagine.
It`s pretty cool huh?
The Fish of the Sea
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Comments
I call it the spirit, I believe it matters , cause who are you going to thank for your gift of great wording! I believe it's one of your best!  but is it yours?.............................................all the best my poet friend..........Jim. XD!.................................Oh that's right ! you're anonymous!,,,,It's mine! XD!
Hahaha! Jim, you gave me a laugh! Poetry all a learning process, but I think an attempt back into reading novels now that I have more free time helps. I find it a very interesting concept and how religion has really evolved over time. Seems to stem from the same seed though, the soul. Thanks for your comments though! Always awsome to chat with you! Best wishes your friend Max
It has evolved; because men try and interpret it without the Holy Ghost and you just get scripture mixed with the philosophies of men! It was written by "men" with the gift of the Holy Ghost and authority to right. Now there are many willing to preach to you with philosophies of men to get gain!..................That is why it is so important to pray and ask for the Spirit to be with you before you read scripture!............your friend , Jim
I really loved this poem! Had a lot of meaning! -Luma xo
Thanks Luma, I'm really glad you liked this one!
nice!!!!!!!!!!!Linda
Awww thanks Linda, I always enjoy reading your comments. Best wishes your friend. TFOTSÂ
Great write Max x
Awww thanks so much Marion, I really appreciate your comments. Best wishes and peace! Your friend MaxÂ
Fabulous! A lovely poem x
Thanks so much Tina, always means so much to me. Kind regards. Your friend MaxÂ
A really great and thought inducing write fots. I find great comfort in knowing that despite all the silly games we play in life, ego etc. That deep down we all know the truth, if that makes sense lol
Nice penning!Â
Absolutely Pen! Perfect sense here. I'm really glad that you took the time to read and comment, really means so much. Best wishes to you as always and peace and smiles to you too! Kind regards. TFOTSÂ
Sounds like a song, quite smooth.
It does matter who's right or wrong - right now, just look at your Aussie fight against the CCP who is blocking your, eg "Yellow Tails" ! People in the free world simply need to wake up.
I agree Yiyan. Seems like disagreement is such a common problem in our world, especially between nations. I doubt the person in the sky cares whether we are right or wrong... seems like its because of greed. Thanks so much for your comment Yiyan, as always, peace and smile to you. Kind regards. TFOTSÂ
âIt`s pretty cool huh?â
Soâs this creative write. đđ»đđ»đđ»
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Aww, thank you so much, John. Always feel honoured by your comments. Peace and Smiles. TFOTS
Interesting write.. it seems this poem reflects alot of what I feel and try to express and you have done so in eloquent fashion.. my friend
Dagnis
Thanks so much! Really appreciate to see new faces commenting on my work. Thanks for taking the time and effort. Peace and smiles to you! TFOTSÂ
Wonderful write it reflects alot of what I feel.... I love the way you wrote it
so elegant and sweet to the point,
Dagnis
Thanks Dagnis, poetry really is a learning process isn't it? Appreciate your support. Best wishes to you. TFOTSÂ
To me it is The Soul who incarnates again and again to learn under different circumstances in different lives, but, yes, for the rest: beautifully putđ
An interesting perspective John! Really enjoyed your input and comments. Means so much. Thanks a million fellow poet! Pecae and smiles. TFOTSÂ
At your service and (perhaps, not knowing them) your family's (as Bilbo Baggings would say)đ (in advance)