Poem -
Better
Mean
Anger
stranger
be nice
Moisturizer cream
Apply
To yourself
Soak
It up
Dont
Give up
Again
Win
The battle
quit
SINNING
LIVING LIFE
gone
Left, right
Shoulders
One side
Weighted
Boulders
An angel
Battling
Across from
Your devil
Bass to
Trebble
words fading
Contemplating
Feelings
Screaming
Fuck the world
Hell on earth
FADED
LOST
COST
MIGHT BE
your life ?
all lower case
Why ?
BECAUSE
EMPHASIS
wanted
To be
Or not
But was
Conveyed
To present
The fact
you are
iNsIgNiFiCaNt
TO ME
LOOK UP
to see me
I look down
still letting you
BREATHE
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Hello ROBERT!!....I am not sure what to make of this.....It seems to convey a lot of VERY controlled anger....covering ground from the angelic to the devilish and then diving into the potential for human insignificance and onto the SIN of Living life itself!!......a poetic tirade?.....regardless, it was very compelling!!......ALL STARS!!....hope all is well in ROBERT - Ville?.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Thanks Tony, you nailed the most impirtant detail "controlled anger" my conceyance on how it seems compassion takes the back seat to self-desire and need. We live in a selfish world, i appreciate the stellar feedback and comment !