BETTER LATE THAN NEVER(Cold Case #3)

BETTER LATE THAN NEVER
In this box I now exist, Contents,
With a twist and still in pain.
A life
left in clovers and clearly when turned Over,
Cause of
death is easily explained.
I was
sixteen and still young
A life
as a teenager full of fun,
When
death came tipping my way.
It was
early Monday morning
A day
set in June, when she
Entered
with such a sashay
She as I,
still quite young and
With a
smile, as bright as the sun
But no
one cared, of the red clay.
She had
fooled them thus far
Stylish
cloths and new car
Though
the spoils of her kill,
I thus lay
As she
entered the classroom,
She as
my wife and I as her groom.
Was all
that entered my mind?
Like a
child mesmerized,
I had
felt, found my prize,
As a
clover of four,
Refused
its find.
Like
candy she fancied my eye,
To get
to know her, I must try,
This
time tomorrow, we’ll be old news.
Soon as
she passed, by my way
Continue
only, could I say,
She’s
lovely from her head to her shoes.
So when
she glanced I did stare,
Just to
show her, I did care.
As she
seated in a desk nearby.
Her
interest she has showed,
My mind
has she blown
If a
bird and I had wings
I would
fly.
So after
class she did share
Some
special moments she I spared
In the
pub shop around the corner
From
school
When
right became wrong and
All
night life began to call
Her
games began to breed, new rules
Remember
me this day
The old
games you once played,
Though
to me, now you are blind
It was
way back then,
At a
time when I was ten and
To me
you were nowhere near kind
So once again
we have met
On this
day I call the bet and
Yet this
meeting was no accident.
It was
me that you hurt,
As you
ripped away my skirt
Then you
raped me and,
The
hospital was where I was sent.
I had
told you back then
That
we’d meet once again
And your
day would be that of no shine
And on
that given day
I would
be the one to say
Now
you’d be the one left behind.
So if
you all are not aware
My body
was left there
In the
marshes of red clay and three clovers
So when
my body is once found
I’ll be
laying here on the ground
And I’ll
be waiting with a gun shot
When
rolled over.
Jim
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the fear of most mothers and fathers to have their child like this so young and vunerable great write jimmy tina x
Thanks Tina,
Its good when the victimized, gets the opportunity to live in the end and retaliation is placed for them in order...
Jimmy
although it is a lengthy piece, it has the potential to bind the readers to the last line. very well done, Jimmy. hasnainx
And to you i am pleased to have received such a heart warming comment and from one friend to another, you are a gentleman and a scholar and then some hasnainx.Thank you dear sir and keep us all inspired with your works of wonder, it is like food for the soul, your poems and comments are.Always good to hear from you......
Sincerly from one brother to the next,
Jimmy
Thanks Rachel,
honored coming from someone such as yourself that has placed on this site, nothing but inspiring material and literary works of fine art.....
Sincerely,
Jim
Loved it homie...
Thank you Mr. Author,
Appreciate your words as much as your poetic works and again proud of what you do and that enerjetic niece, said she will give you a shout out, very shortly, spoke to her mom, once again today and still is waiting for that email address, if she email me before you, i will forward it. Take Care Mr. Author....
Jim
Jimmy- You can write and write, and I can read and read your works, they are full of interesting works, this story is really "COOL"
tx and keep on keepin on
Nancy
Hey Nancy,
Thank you a million. It is friends such as yourself, that inspires us all to wonna bring life back into what we all love doing the most,reading and writing poems by us all over and over again and take pleasure out of that which others that don't take interest in, is unfortunately missing out on.Thank you a whole bunch and your works of artistical writings, intrigues me more than you could ever know as well...
Sincerely,
Jimmy
Mmmm I like this :) you brought this story to life, wow.. Clever, exciting and entertaining. I think i will ask my two teenage sons to read this :) You have great talent, keep sharing, enjoyed reading. Oh and a big WELL DONE. :)
Thank you Louise C.
You are a honor and a scholar and i think you for your comment and pass on my love for your works as well.
The kindest of all regards,
Jimmy
It's very polysemantic, and that's just what I love most in poems!!
The way you wrote this, it kept surprising me word by word untill the sad ending...
*added to favorites*
Good luck!!
Greetings Bernd,
Thank you for the comment and as always, you are on top of your game (24/7), in my book...
Jim