Life, is one big dream!!!!!
Are all our dreams, (as a whole), to be a collection of just (one)? The mapping
of pallets, of good and bad deeds, rendered one another?
Though some deeds maybe viewed, (relatively simple), much more could there be said, of the collective value, of the (elusive) others.
All laid out strategicly and not blind, (each dream), has its own time line and each with their own value, that (can't), be replaced.
there's the ones, that makes no sense, if i had to pay, I would'nt give a pense, yet the good, bad and the wierd, all has its space.
There will be, dreams of being once, a noble little brother, are a daughter boasting, southern pride, (of are from), a mothers (care).
And oh! there will be nightmares, throughout this format, some with night sweats and others, birthing (fears), inwhich our heart (tares).
Just as an old southerly woven blanket, each (patch) sewn but in due time, grew a little wear, between the time the blanket, completes its mend.
A map of one big dream, (a story) given to (all), to be told in fabric, of an endless flow of each life, from the very start it seems, to the (stories) end....
And there's those dreaded rips, it would appear, where dreams of life itself, threatens to end, and mending them, well beyond damage.
Sometimes it Will be, the (way of the meek), turning of the cheek, rather path
of the beast, that eludes the claim, of the untamed savage.
A sacred, personal blanket, of a slew of condensed but meaningful dreams, a whole lives history, (laid out), beyond our walls floor.
leading to one grand apacoliptic event, (with one dreams end), it gives way to its predecessor, who awaits outside, its soon to open door.
A security blanket, within their own rights, a regime of soldiers, on guard through our nights, some important to remember, others (not so).
Like the changing wind, they seem to float along the breeze, and quite naturally just as that breeze, they (unpredictability), come and go..
The blue print of our lives, (lay found), not awake but in sleep? so many be deprived a life, with an insight on life, yet forseen?
There are dreams, that may even allude, (down right) rock in hand, throw it, then be rude, no matter how hard your quest, its means.
Are dreams, (just as a scatter of showers), held to no bars, or are they given glimpses, of prearranged hints, into the book, of our "life."
a life that didn't get a chance to start, before it was done, whereby no heed, to be made but all attentions to be paid, to the blade of the knife.
No matter what order, they come in our life, all dreams will cast its own shadow, on how life will select, the path it will take...
I haven't been a sleep to dream it, so it would'nt happen even if It should, an interrupted life through insomnia kept locked awake............Jim
About poem: whether all dreams, (as a collective), even (as silly as some seem) and as (important as all others), are a product of and have stock in one another. Life told, in a sequence of individually delivered, checkered and some uncheckered events, (seen), through a series of unfiltered dreams and down a path, just as (important) as neurons be, to the brain.... leading to one complete, although (unforseen) finally, (in the fabrics), of a (singly), but through, (faith structured), given life...."Pre-Planned or Made-up, as we go"?..You decide...
J/A.
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Hi Jimmy I absolutely love this poem. Many times
through life i ask the questions you raise.
I have had dreams where events have happened
in the near future some really sad , given to me as a warning
of a death,they don`t ease the blow when that death comes
but i knew it was going to happen and could prepare a little for it
I have also had recurring dreams where it is like I am given a
message that I need to untangle to help someone,I have helped
and not had the dream again.
These dreams i often write about in my poetry
although some have been very sad they are an integral part of me
I don t really want to have them but i do,
Thank you for sharing your wonderful write pinned
Best wishes Debs
Greetings Deborah,
Thanks and so true is your comment... Thank you for the comment and the site visit....I use try and remember all of mine and would go as far as, to wake up and write them down, as i have them....Jim
Hi Jim,
Very heavy work with great depth and ingenuity. It caused me to dig deep into myself in order to respond.
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A patchwork quilt woven every night
With the dreams of yesterday
A lifelong chronicle, a diary of visions
Our loves, our fears, our inhibitions
Yet, in each one is reality
For they are the products of our psyche
For a fleeting moment, we reunite with lost soulmates
Or, we wake up just in time from impending disaster
But, when the final dream ends
Have these all been the paths to reincarnation?
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Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Hey larry,
Appreciate the new addition, maybe next time we'll talk about trying a poem, from the perspective of (2) pens rather than (1). To see what can be concocted, from (2) points of view, (collaborative) poetry...
Thanks for visiting my neck of the woods,
Jim
I woke up very sad this morning....reason is, I dreamt my daddy was back and we were living happily...I was so into it that I thought it was real only for me to open my eyes and then I was on my bed...My day was ruined from that point...Most times I dream and I see the same thing happening in real life...A dream can be a message from God...Very insightful piece...Thanks for sharing this Jim...I read it at the right time
So very sorry Rose,
Didn't mean to cause hurt or pain, to any with this write and your father hasn't left you dear friend, he's right where you and he spoke last and of your fondest times, you two spent together.. And as long as you keep him fresh, in your conscious mind, (just as I'm sure you do), he'll always poses a ticket, to catch that nightly train, through your dreams and back home again, to his loving daughter, Rose Sho.......Keep a smile on your face Rose, (like he would always want you to) and he misses you, just as much, (if not more) then you he.....Jim
P.S.Thank you for such a touching response, through your comment and may all your dreams at night, (be those), of times, when (happiness) came to be, (so easy) in life and (not just a chore), that now eludes you and your father both, due to his departure and (at peace) be your heart, each morning you awake....Jimmy