Turbulent Waters

Fools rush in, where angels even fear to tread..across the dark waters,
we'll not yearn, for violence leads to dread.
When once calmed waters, chaoticly now, cast their own violent shadows,
left drift a float, a boat, without persons to sail nor paddle.
A ship, wrecked at sea, no island to claim as home, so many parrished,
in deep seas that night, so (many) who did die (alone).
World winds now fiercely unfold, have become too turbulent in its own self control,
no rest to be scaved, even for the ancient dead.
Though i have become, what society without care and prior knowledge,
has (prematurely) brand me, and on this prominent night.
My day as optomis and without doubt, would surely come and nothing,
would be gained or demand to be given, without a fierce fight.
Songs of the lost souls, through this nights intrusive collection, now forever left,
to pierce without warrent, the silence of the nights soiled air.
A voyage of a once predicted unsankable voyeur, now subjective to the darkest,
of all natures furies to be served on a platter, with need of no fare.
What is hidden, within the minds third eye, when horror takes an unannounced
and unwelcomed seat, at a table for two then leaves, praising its battle cry.
When invading, violent wet waters, many fantoms deep, took no prisoners,
under the darkest of a long and lonely nights sky.....Jim
About poem: The sinking of an ocean liner, once said to be vertuely unsinkable and the many lives horribly lost, to the depths of a turbulent and spontaneously unrelenting sea bottom. With no one occupant, spared to tell its intrusive story...
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I was hooked at start, thank you for this read, very powerful. Amazing talent you have.
~Mark~
Thanks Mark,
Appreciate the time you took to read this poem and the grateful comment you left in lieu of your departure......Jim
You're welcome Jim,
Truth has a depth unlike any other, mostly because there are many who understand the loss, story, etc. Thank you.
~Mark~
Hey Cherie,
As always my friend, you have a way of dismantling any story, in order to expose it's entire means for its reasoning......Thanks a million Cherie........xoxo Jim
P.S. Send my hellos to Tone.......
Hi Jimmy,
After I read your beautiful poem "Turbulent Waters", it inspired me to write one of my own titled "Beware The Ides Of April Mighty Titania----Nostradamus", which I have just posted. Your powerful words moved me deeply, in the beginning, feeling like you were talking about the Titanic, but after reading your postscript, I was not so sure. So thank you so much for this wonderful inspiration.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
My fellow poet, Mr. Larry Ran,
It's been a while and pleased to see, you as always, are, "(still firing, on all cylinders.)" Thank you for the elluring comment my friend and nice to know, l will get an opportunity to hear the story through the bright mind of another fellow poet and friend ...Strange the ship you spoke on, for from the start, it did become the subject, of first my choosing but i kinda backed off and in place, set sail a yacht, the same size of the Titanic, which like it as well, met its fate, at deep sea..Along with it, many lives, to have been lost, with no means of survival.....(So
you are spot on), I kinda backed away from telling to much of the ships story and a little, (super-over lay), of the waters story, kinda crept in I tr s place, as the (primary) subject of poem......Thanks for the read my friend, I guess I'll see you in your back yard as I go in search for yours....... Jim