Poem - 23 May 2021, 13:50

Bewildered

Gwendoline

Bewildered
Mind fragmented
With copious amounts of fatuous words

Unhinged dreams
Manifest in streams
Like specks of dust
In sunlight beams

My inner voice seems slurred
Whilst I struggle to be heard

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RG23 May 2021, 14:22

Wow Gwendoline you get so much across in so few words ....
I particularly found the middle stanza the highlight of this for me personally as it so relatable. Absolutely stunning as always .

I have to ask if the art is yours ?
either way really cool piece .

Gwendoline23 May 2021, 16:06

Thanks sw, sadly the art I cannot take credit for. I wrote the poem this evening after struggling to write anything down. I then found the art and thought it went well with what I was trying to convey. I am super pleased you connected them both. Thank you for your continue support and empathy 💗

Jill Tait23 May 2021, 14:25

💕❤️🌹❤️💕

Gwendoline23 May 2021, 16:06

Thanks lovey 💗🌹xx

Tony Taylor23 May 2021, 15:26

Fantastic picture!!......painted into life's struggles with words that bring not only the picture to life......but shines a brilliant light on subject matter that seems to be everywhere these days......but like all struggles in this reality......one way or another......"THIS TOO SHALL PASS!".......PINNED!!.......another excellent piece from the mind of would be 'Greatness'!!.........LOVE & ROCKETS!!......your ever-friend and admirer........TONY : )

Gwendoline23 May 2021, 16:08

Wowser Tony as ever you grace me with such kindness and support. Thank you so much for leaving your wise words next to this piece. Means a lot and thanks for that pin too. Love and hugs Gwen 💗

Marion23 May 2021, 18:13

Powerful write Gwen...hugs 💕

Gwendoline24 May 2021, 11:00

Thanks my friend, I managed to squeeze something from my brain at last 💗 hugs xo

Liliana of the ...23 May 2021, 19:30

Those last lines are a real show stopper.
So well phased.
Great write.

Gwendoline24 May 2021, 11:00

Thank you so very much lovely poet :)

The fish of the sea23 May 2021, 19:41

Gwen! (Oh how many times do I have to apologise for being late to the party!) Such a fantastic poem here, I really enjoyed the sense of inner struggles I got from this one. Smiles my friend~ I hope you are well~

Gwendoline24 May 2021, 11:01

Hello Max :) Never have to say sorry, you are never too late. Always a great to hear from you my friend. Thank you for reading this one x

Being Me24 May 2021, 08:28

I think we have all been here at times. This is a strong piece that is superbly worded. Well done on an awesome poem x

Gwendoline24 May 2021, 11:03

Thanks so much for reading this one bm and for sharing your empathy with this piece xoxo

Greg Etsell25 May 2021, 02:31

wonderful poem

Gwendoline25 May 2021, 02:52

Thank you lovely x

Syd15 June 2021, 18:16

Very relatable Gwen.
Hope you're keeping well.

- Syd x

Gwendoline15 June 2021, 19:36

Thank you Syd for stopping by and reading this one. Sorry you can relate to it. I am plodding on. I really should sleep as it’s heading for 4am where I am. Thank you for commenting and I hope you are well x