Poem -
Beyond
Like 2 Pin it 0I drink thee in with my soul, with a hundred Doves wings beating in my chest. Your smile sends fireworks to my heart, against your grace my spirit is powerless. Have we met before; for I do not know, but an old soul I feel from you radiating ghost lives from the past. For now we are on a mortal plain with mortal bodies just the same. The day will come when I shall see you once again beyond this mortal life without the pain of losing you across the oceans ever again.
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hello Margaret
reading over your work I see one small typo. thyne which is another spelling for thine, thine means your in old speak English. thy would work. I write a lot of old English poetry. just trying to help out a fellow poet.
Thank you much I appreciate it.
I had a mistake on my other poem also, so I will correct the one you found.
I'm always looking to improve!
Best regards,
Margaret Ann
thine means "your"Β Β thee would be "you"
I guess I misinterpreted Webster's definition, I will correct that mistake.
I appreciate your input!
Best regards,
Margaret Ann
Margaret, don't be too upset I don't mean to be mean. I have a few old speak poems if you would like to read them let me know
No I really do mean that I appreciate your comments, suggestions, and I especially appreciate your time. IΒ do wish to improve, and let's be real without your comments I never would do better.
Thank you for all assistance!
Best regards,
Margaret Ann
P.S. I would never think that of you.
here is a good comparative site that will help
http://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/british/thine
Thank you much! I'll check into it, as that would make an excellent reference tool.
Best regards,
Margaret Ann