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 Black roses and the snake in the Wetlands (an experiment combining a play and a poem)

 Black roses and the snake in the Wetlands (an experiment combining a play and a poem)

 
(Lime light shines on the dancer
Standing alone on an empty stage corner
Costumed as a snake, whose
Heart is longing for true love;
Even as a snake longs for moisture
Twisting in the desert sand.  
 Suddenly his hope is sparked again
 Seeing the lush wetlands in the distance)

The dancer slithers
 towards the underbrush
 Where the sun is glowing softly
without the usual burn
 his tongue probes near the entrance
Seeking the comfort of moisture;
  desperately feverish is his skin    
Alas, beyond the matted grass
  There suddenly appears
An opening
Though dark and foreboding,
 with primordial boldness
  a cavernous place
he enters in   
meandering past  
   slippery partitions.     
Serendipitous, awakening  
 heighten sensations;         
 Electric chains of   
Constricting bliss,
 possessing 

(Limelight shines to  
where she stands)
   A vision
bathed in ethereal light
Holding black roses
in marble white hands
  offering him mystery words
Spoken too softly to be understood  
he sees only her lips moving,
 quivering   
    hallow bird songs reverberating           
 pleasantly perfuming           
Drawing him in
closer
 Her touch, her kiss
Two tangled wayward souls
 find solace   

 laying on the cool dry nest
snake skin shed
  placid in the afterglow
Bodies new, curled and spent
Eyes closing 
Drifting away to the memory factory….
 stowed, waiting to be awakened…someday

(fades the limelight)
 

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Nine Eleven

It's like reading an Edgar Allan Poe story, well written.

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Christopher Correia

your comment is very helpful, Gerard, I really appreciate it thank you, to be honest I could not wrap my brains around where I wanted to go with this one, at first I had it as an 'erotic' tale and took out some of the more graphic images, not wanting to be to obvious, lol, yes, now I can clearly see the Gothic element surfacing, thanks again for great comment, cheers poet

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Christopher Correia

Keith, cheers man, 'snakes' 'marble white hands' and 'carvernous places' it does sound very dark, appreciate the comment, thanks and glad you enjoyed 

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lodigiana

Wow Christopher! what a great concept! loved it and pinned for future inspiration- great work xxx
Lodigiana

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Christopher Correia

so glad you did enjoy, lodigiana, yes, I want to experiment more in this genre, it is really limitless what we can do with words, though it can be a bit scary to try new things, self doubt creeps in, with me anyway, thanks for the encouragement, cheers poet

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Christopher Correia

lol, not your fault, PoetessDarkly, I did insert quite a few images in this one, twas an effect I was trying to convey; not easy to 'say'  all you want to say, and not having individual things within, be a distraction, in other words, passion is part of the nature of man/man, what makes us tick, but it's not the only thing to focus on, so glad you liked, poetess, cheers

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