Black roses and the snake in the Wetlands (an experiment combining a play and a poem)

(Lime light shines on the dancer
Standing alone on an empty stage corner
Costumed as a snake, whose
Heart is longing for true love;
Even as a snake longs for moisture
Twisting in the desert sand.
Suddenly his hope is sparked again
Seeing the lush wetlands in the distance)
…
The dancer slithers
towards the underbrush
Where the sun is glowing softly
without the usual burn
his tongue probes near the entrance
Seeking the comfort of moisture;
desperately feverish is his skin
Alas, beyond the matted grass
There suddenly appears
An opening
Though dark and foreboding,
with primordial boldness
a cavernous place
he enters in
meandering past
slippery partitions.
Serendipitous, awakening
heighten sensations;
Electric chains of
Constricting bliss,
possessing
…
(Limelight shines to
where she stands)
A vision
bathed in ethereal light
Holding black roses
in marble white hands
offering him mystery words
Spoken too softly to be understood
he sees only her lips moving,
quivering
hallow bird songs reverberating
pleasantly perfuming
Drawing him in
closer
Her touch, her kiss
Two tangled wayward souls
find solace
…
laying on the cool dry nest
snake skin shed
placid in the afterglow
Bodies new, curled and spent
Eyes closing
Drifting away to the memory factory….
stowed, waiting to be awakened…someday
(fades the limelight)

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Comments
It's like reading an Edgar Allan Poe story, well written.
your comment is very helpful, Gerard, I really appreciate it thank you, to be honest I could not wrap my brains around where I wanted to go with this one, at first I had it as an 'erotic' tale and took out some of the more graphic images, not wanting to be to obvious, lol, yes, now I can clearly see the Gothic element surfacing, thanks again for great comment, cheers poet
Gerald got ahead of me,I agree with his comment!
Keith, cheers man, 'snakes' 'marble white hands' and 'carvernous places' it does sound very dark, appreciate the comment, thanks and glad you enjoyed
Wow Christopher! what a great concept! loved it and pinned for future inspiration- great work xxx
Lodigiana
so glad you did enjoy, lodigiana, yes, I want to experiment more in this genre, it is really limitless what we can do with words, though it can be a bit scary to try new things, self doubt creeps in, with me anyway, thanks for the encouragement, cheers poet
Wow, For some reason this ink made me blush..... I guess all snakes live their lives in the gutter... my mind surely has slithered there lol You have such a master at words.
lol, not your fault, PoetessDarkly, I did insert quite a few images in this one, twas an effect I was trying to convey; not easy to 'say' all you want to say, and not having individual things within, be a distraction, in other words, passion is part of the nature of man/man, what makes us tick, but it's not the only thing to focus on, so glad you liked, poetess, cheers