Nice consonance of "b", "w", and "s" here, Ru T. The combination of onomatopoeia your poem creates almost sounds like a bird with a broken wing, fluttering and floundering around on the ground, still trying to fly.
Kinda like life, huh?
Nice writing... ~Dean Kuch
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Hi Relic, thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. Ru :)
Nice consonance of "b", "w", and "s" here, Ru T. The combination of onomatopoeia your poem creates almost sounds like a bird with a broken wing, fluttering and floundering around on the ground, still trying to fly.
Kinda like life, huh?
Nice writing...
~Dean Kuch
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Wow, thanks for your feedback Dean. Much appreciated. Ru :)
The pleasure is entirely mine.
You're more than welcome.
~Dean