BlacknBlue
All tension withers to nothing,
previously on the verge to crack,
gazing at such a sight to behold
just...dark...endless...BLACK.
The planets & stars a stark contrast
aligned with perfect precision,
coexisting void of conflict
no discord or division.
Ah, and then the following day
such a taken-for-granted view
another remedy directly above...
sharp, riveting, brilliant BLUE.
Clouds float effortlessly by,
nature's caress for a weary spirit;
patterns never to be repeated...
can we perpetually remain within it?
This cosmos we're a part of
offers extreme serenity
if only we slow down enough
to appreciate its amenity.
All of this we can drink of amply
limited only by our vision,
the best of any movie made...
not to mention free admission.
Taking in this masterpiece
there's no finite capacity,
to think it's orchestrated by chance
takes a certain audacity.
Realization taps on our shoulder
to provide an insightful clue;
pondering its magnificence...
divine artistry, BlacknBlue.
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Comments
I think yours is alot better than mine and i like the line, just...dark...endless...BLACK.
We all have our own interpretations of the same subject manner. Ā I believe I pinned your version and I haven't pinned a lot. ;) Ā Thx for the kind words!*!*!
Hi Jacki Ā A very lovely piece, the imagery is superb
A pleasure to readĀ
I have not read you before but will look forwardĀ
to reading more of your workĀ
Best wishes Ā DebsĀ
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Thanks! Ā Nature is so magnificent...I'm guilty of not smelling the roses enough when life gets busy... Ā Appreciate you reading my efforts and taking the time to comment!
Hi Jackie, lovely write. Enjoyed this. Warm regards. Cheers.
Thank you, Cleo! Ā This is a subject that is close to home, such beauty surrounding us always if we but take the time to enjoy it... Ā Look forward to reading your work!*!*!
JackiĀ
wow... great write
Greatly appreciate it, Bryan! Ā Nature & all its beauty is such a gift... Ā Have a great day!*!*!
Congratulations on this nomination ! A worthy entrant.
Warmest wishes !! Ā :)
Keep up the great work !
Thank you, Richard! Ā It's been so great writing again (although sleep is compromised-ha!). Ā I've appreciated your support greatly & hope you enjoy nature's free gifts!*!*!
Jacki
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I Ā love this, so very vivid xx
Very insightful xx
Thanks so much! Means a lot coming from you! Have very much enjoyed getting back into writing...
Thank you Jacki, I am very much aĀ novice, but I'm learning a lot form the many talented people on here, keep writing yourĀ fantastic xx
Appreciate that so very much!
Hey CONGRATS JACKI..... on the nod from administration........ you deserve it my friend.......LOVE your stuff...... and looking forward to more!!....... keep 'em comin' sweet poetess!!........ your friend and admirer........T xo. ?ā³ā“āā
Awww, you always have such kind words, Tony... Ā Thank you so much for the support! Ā It's been therapeutic to write and inspiring to read the works of others, as well! Ā I need a dictionary for some of your high-level words-ha!! Ā Looking forward to the journey with the rest of the writing family out here!*!*! Ā So thankful I happened upon this site... Ā Blessings- Ā Jacki
Congratulations Jacki, well done!! X
Thanks so much! Ā I just really enjoy writing and being a part of this creative, supportive group...
Hello Jacki...
Congratulations on your winning write!Ā
Hugs...
sparrowsongĀ
Thank you so much! Ā So fun being a part of this group out here... Ā Happy writing!*!*!
Congratulations!
J ;)
Thank you so much! Ā It's so wonderful to be a part of this writing family out here. Ā So thankful I happened upon the site!*!*! Ā Look forward to reading more of your work...
Congratulations! Well doneĀ
Thanks!! Ā It's been great being a part of this community out here!
Congratulations...Well deserved!!
Thank you! Ā It's so refreshing to be a part of this writing group. :)
Hi Ā Jacki Congratulations well deservedĀ
Best wishes DebsĀ
Appreciate it, Debs! Ā Finding CosmoFunnel has been such a blessing and your support has been appreciated!! Ā