Poem -
Bleed To Love Her
He had her blood on his lips and a hunger that could not be satisfied
The taste of her blood was so Devine it mesmerized his mind
Was he going to give her immortality or let her die ?
He had tasted many girls in the past but her blood was like wine and he craved it all the time
When he looked deep into her eyes there was a foreboding
A feeling that raptured his mind between space and time
Even though he killed so he could live
He wanted to save her from her pain and make her his blood thirsty concubine
Together they would kill and love in blood soaked affair of the heart
Inspired by the picture and Fleetwood Mac s song bleed to love her
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Comments
Really enjoyed this vampires dilemma so beautifully brought to the page !
Well written.
:)
Hi Richard. Glad you enjoyed this one was alot of fun to write . The picture and the music just took my mind and my pen did the rest . Thanks for your comments hrl :)
I've really enjoyed writing the poems about vampires I have submitted to Cosmo !!! :)
Best wishes !
Good write HardRock, so different I thought it was really cool how you came up with this fictional write being inspired by a Fleetwood Mac song that's pretty cool. Enjoyed this dark vampire bloodlust tale.
Hi Devon thanks . I saw the picture and remembered the fleet wood Mac song and the story wrote itself . I enjoyed writing this one and their will be more different poems coming soon. I am finding my stride on Cosmo . Cheers. Thanks for your comments
I can picture Vincent Price reading this one with his deep voice. Imaginative poem.
Hi Shirley glad you enjoyed this write. I could just hear Mr price reading this aloud . Thanks for your comments hrl :)
I love how descriptive it is! It's just so embedded into my mind my deep and thoughtful this piece is.
I say it's worth gold, my dear friend. :)
Hey abstract. Thanks glad you enjoyed this write. I appreciate your comments. Sometimes a vampire does have a conscious.lol hugs to you rock