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Whoβs that lurking in the corner, far across my darkened room?
Shadows slither, getting warmer, casting caustic shades of doom.
Is it my imaginationβis it real, or mere faΓ§ade?
Will he be my ruination?
Where, oh where are you, dear God?
Β
Seeping from the slinking shadows, slithering like scaly snakes,
dead men dangle from the gallows, ghastly wretched sounds they make!
Jesus, do you hear me calling in my darkest hour of need?
Father, bring the holy waterβ
come cast out the demonβs seed.
Β
Fires inside my soul engulf me, burning red-hot from within.
Time is up, no one can bluff me; for I'm forced to face my sin.
Christ, canβt you accommodate me, wrench me from his wretched grasp.
Listless lullabies sedate me,
breath breathed out in one, long gasp.
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Whoβs the image in my mirror, evil lurking in cold eyes?
Lord, the visionβs growing clearer, hear me now my plaintive cries.
Festβring blisters cover oβer me, turning alabaster skin to black.
Yet, the vision here before meβ
Is just me, now, looking back.
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Comments
Deserves far more credit.Β Deliciously dark write, thoroughly enjoyed and has inspired me to write one too.
Excellent, Simon.
There's no greater compliment as a writer than to know you have inspired others in one way or another.
I sincerely appreciate your kind comments.
?β ~Dean~β ?
Excellent! In both tempo and narrative!
Thank you, Ian!
I am very grateful for your comments.
All my best,
?β ~Dean~β ?
genius!Β
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I couldn't ask for a better one word review than that, Carey.
Thanks so much for reading!
?β₯β€οΈ~Dean~β€οΈβ₯?
I feel your words with this piece of work itβs well written it opens up a lot of worlds to me
Thank you for reading, Jeff.
I appreciate your time as well as the positive feedback.
With gratitude,
~Dean
Woww thrilling dark poem, so creatively appealing in masterpiece style muse indeed. The demons inside us, our fears n nightmares eh. Kudos for this wild fantasy style.
Nice to read from u again,Β
pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too
Thanks so much for checking this out, S.zaynab.kamoonpury.
I'm very grateful for your glowing review.
All my best,
~Dean
Super stellar write my friend. I miss your posts!
Thanks, Lisa. I miss posting. :(
Good write! I love it.