The Devil Came to Church Today
โโThe Devil Came to Church Today~~>
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The devil came to church today, he swooped right through the door.
The Pastor Nevill ran away across the polished floor.
Now face to face with this disgrace, I summoned up the will
to stay in place, and thus erase this demonโs morbid thrill.
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I shall not claim from whence he came; he looked to be from Hell.
A demon sent to Earth to maim; he did his job quite well.
Huge leathery wings, pure terror bringsโOh yes, this beast can fly!
They beat the sky, those horrid things, I feared we all would die.
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With one swift move the beast disproved most demons moved quite slow.
It snatched my son away from me, I was behooved to show
no Hell spawned thing could best a King, Iโve faith enough to know.
I pulled my Bible from my breast then bade the beast should go.
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A Godly man, I raised my hand, invoking Jesus Christ.
โBegone, foul thing, the King of Kings shall never ask thee twice!โ.
The demon flinched, itโs breathing hitchedโthen dropped down to itโs knees.
It was bewitched, mind came unhitched, and soon, my son was free.
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We never speak about the week the devil came to church,
as week to week and month by month, weโve left it in the lurch.
Should you, dear friend, not make amends, the sound of wings youโll hear.
Theyโll spell your end, you cannot winโand live a life of fear.
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Comments
Perfectly measured, Dean! It flows in such an exquisite manner as the narrative develops! Truly awesome!
Thanks, Ian.
I'm really glad ya like it.
Much obliged,
~Dean
Awesome write Dean.ย Thoroughly enjoyed the dark story telling, effortless.
I really appreciate your comments, Simon.
Thanks a million.
~Dean
Damn Dean I need to put a bell on you so I know when you post again, I just hate to miss any of your stuff
Cool write, Dean. And it does flow very well.ย
Really enjoyed that.ย
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I hope it wasn't a person this demon, a metaphorical demon maybe? Whoever harms people in churches or mosques is the worst demonic evil I believe. This poem is said in awesome rhyme scheme, the type I find difficult though might try it one day. Kudos.
pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too .
I am like Lisa a bell should ring when every you write
I miss this one great poem as always
Wow great imagery!!