Blue Eyes Looking at A Place Called Knowing
She was a proud woman from Barcelona
who made him feel alive with just one smile
He took a long flight just to feel her touch
love only hours away, he felt no ways tired
...
Motel sixo came to view as she described;
this was where the bad kind came for love
cigarette smoke still clinging to the walls
highway vibe sounding from dark curtains
....
When she knocked on his door, past noon
they lay still on clean white cotton sheets
their voices telling secrets like confession
her auburn hair covered his face and neck
...
There was a moment when silence fell;
now they became aware at the same time
this was the moment to begin the big kiss
each movement and touch held fascination
...
Tasting lips ripe with the flavour of longing
Touching skin soft supple lit senses on fire
pleasure made the pulse of movement rapid
Man Woman alone in the carnal wonderland
...
Then she pulled on her blue jeans up snug
Her eyes not leaving a cold indifferent face
Studying the man with serious blue eyes
wondering why he could stay only one day
....
A short meaningless embrace; a parting kiss
then she drove away and he took the highway;
back to the place he still called his home
at her house she eyed the mirror, suddenly
she began knowing all the secrets he held
....
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Honorable Poetess Lily Mae,
Good write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote,
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
thanks for comment Lily Mae (I think) I heard Philadelphia is a very nice place to visit?
Williamsji I've been called a lot worse than 'Lily Mae'...... gosh darnit I'm honoured to be mistaken for Lily Mae...thank you my friend
Hey chris at least at motel 6 they leave the light on for you. Great write cheers to you
lol, true my friend.... and first thing you want to do is turn off the lights when you get there....cheers to you also, hope you are having great evening
Hey Flower thanks for comment, and yes I'm wondering who I am myself lol
Hey Chris the secret Lily Mae thinks you both holds is now public knowledge because Philadelphia woman can't keep secrets. Love your poems they always tell a story. oxox
Thanks Sweetpea, I do try to tell a story; sometimes true sometimes fiction, but that is something I appreciate about this site....you can post 'poetry' and that is a sacred joy for me....certainly I don't appreciate the personal tone of your comment, but you are entitled to write whatever you desire, it is a free country....really thank you for thought provoking comment; notice that I did change Philadelphia to Barcelona, just saying...have great evening
Christopher your writes are always incredible with every word keeping your attention to detail throughout. I like how you made a sleazy situation sound beautiful allstars. Oh and Philadelphia is a nice place yo visit by the way depending on were you go if you ever need that info you could always ask me I know the coty well.
hey Devon, thanks for comment bro. wow I can so tell that I missed what I wanted to convey with this one my friend, it really wasn't my intent to portray a 'sleazy situation' to be honest, it was more of an attempt to show longing and misguided trust and just tell a pretty basic story....and sorry if I made that sound beautiful; it's sad and cold really....and I'm not picking on you by any means; I quite like you....poetry is liberating for me, and still I don't touch certain subjects; murder; for the most part...cannibalism sadistic scenarios involving humans or animals, putting anyone down or confronting anyone 'publicly' for anything I personally don't approve off....there are others, but you get the idea...and Pliladelphia seems like a very nice place, hey especially west Philadelphia; that's where the Fresh Prince of Bel Air is from no? '....west Philadelphia born and raise--on a playground is where I spent most of my days...' lol, sounds like a very cool place though I have never been....Devon I appreciate the comment my friend, but I take 'artistic freedom' VERY seriously, and I don't believe in expressing my personal beliefs while infringing on the rights of someone to just express their 'poetic' thoughts, without being confronted, just saying....cheers pal...
Christopher no harm no foul it was my misinterpretation thats what I go th from it but thanks for clearing that up I try to see how the poet saw it when writing but i dont always see. West Philadelphia a few spots are okay I livr in the far north east on the outskirts of the city its woodsy and thats what I enjoy im not much of a city guy. Cheers to you good sir