Poem -
THE BLUE HOUR (Huitain Form)
Tis the blue hour, time for love
Twilight blooms softly as we lie
Within our sylvan secret grove
Watching the day melting the sky
Enraptured by our own sweet sighs
Upon my heart your face impressed
Forever there in my mind’s eye
This hour and your hand’s caress
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awesome Valerie!
such a warm, soft, romantic tone!
beautiful!!!
Stephen! Â Thanks so much. Â Yes, a little gentle soft romance! Â Glad you liked this one!
val
Valerie Eleby,
" THE BLUE HOUR " Superb poem, but I am not familiar with this form of poetry  " HUITAUN ". Where I can find the rules, Good.The image attached to this poem is excellent. I love itÂ
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Williamsji!  The Huitain is a Spanish poetry form…it consists of 8 verse lines (octet), 8 sylablles in each line and has a set rhyme pattern of ababbcbc.  You might also wish to try the "Cinquain" which is also another short Spanish form Â
Thank you for reading this piece.
val
Valerie Eleby,
Many thanks for more info in this regard.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI