Poem -
bold/love/hold on/idek
When you have someone special
Don't ever let go
Because they might leave you...
You never know
And if you want someone
You might as well ask
Because who knows??
It's a simple task
That person...
That thing that you claim
May only be a word away
May cost you some pain
But if you are sure
It's what you want
Then go out and say it
Or else it'll haunt
Use your voice
Because you can
People are here to talk
Well, at least I am
I want to say
You should be bold
Today is your day
Before you get old
Your never too young,
Never too old,Β
And if you give up now.
Well... that's not too bold
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Comments
when you try to rhyme + you try to write a poem + your me = recipe for disaster!
sry for all you have to read this.
hopefully you aren't scarred, or scareeeeed
Joya!Β
Don't be sorry! That was wonderful! You have beautiful ideas, and a great outlook on life, and you're a lovely wrioter...and writer, too!!Β
Great job, my friend.Β
I loved that!! Honestly.Β
Matthew.Β
thank youuu!
i' glad someone liked it... haha
:D
Hey My Awesome Friend,Β
Don't worry, people will start to notice you once you get more exposure(poetically! I mean. lol), and you'll have so many people commenting on your wonderful poetry, and you'll be a star, and forget all about me, and I'll start drinking, and become depressed, and wind up living on the streets, eventually freezing to death...well, at least you'll be happy! Thanks a lot!Β
Kidding!Β
You're awesome!Β
Keep writing!Β
Matthew.Β
oh my gosh, that's a little depressing much? and NO DRINKING that is not okayyyyyy
i'm sure you'll be okay, and anyways if i become a star then i'll donate some of my money to people on the streets, and who knows maybe it will be you!
kidding too!
i know i'm awesome, don't worry... your awesome too i guess... just kidding your really cool
i always will write!
:D
Writing what is in a person's heart takes true talent.. and you have that in spades, clubs, diamonds and definitely hearts
aw, thank you so much!
Such a cool poetic prose hereΒ Joya.... taking the reader on the truth and reality rollercoaster of love, I can relate! through the universal possibilities!!......ALL STARS!!... well done dear poet !.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?β΄β€
thank you, i do my best!Β
:D